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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 9:48:55 PM
Hi Ivonne, what a beautiful image. Your whole portfolio looks like it is full of beauty! I will have to take some time and look through the many photos. Thanks for your comment to me.
-Al
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| Photo By: Ivonne *
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 9:34:49 PM
The level I changed is a mixture of shadow/midtone/highlight (50/10/5) so that I thought the brown was darkened, but the reflections were brought out by the mids and highs. The stream appears more like a mirror.
-Al
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Photo By: Maryanne Murillo
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 9:28:35 PM
Very moving Viola!
-Al
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| Photo By: Violetta Tarnowska
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 9:07:27 PM
Hanna, that is kinda scary. Thanks for taking the time to point it out as I did not see it until you did the crop.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:52:40 PM
Maryanne, I tried to lessen the brown in the stream (I might have gone overboard)and ended up turning your shot into something else. I hope you do not mind as it becomes a different animal altogether.
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:51:58 PM
Maryanne, I tried to lessen the brown in the stream (I might have gone overboard)and ended up turning your shot into something else. I hope you do not mind as it becomes a different animal altogether.
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:43:26 PM
Hi Srna, thanks so much for your always positive comments. The best to you!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:42:30 PM
Maryanne, thank you I would really like to have a copy. That is very sweet of you!
-Al
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| Photo By: Maryanne Murillo
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:41:20 PM
Quite a departure from the winter scene in the last post! Well done Srna, the color and feeling is there. All the best to you!
-Al
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| Photo By: Srna Stankovic
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:37:45 PM
Hi Srna, very nice winter scene. The night colors with the sparkle of the snowflakes looks close to real!
-Al
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| Photo By: Srna Stankovic
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:33:26 PM
Maryanne, only because I know that you were not completely happy with the "pop" of the weekend's shooting; I took the liberty of putting some pop into this image. I am not saying it is better, just showing you that you can control the outcome more.
-Al
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| Photo By: Maryanne Murillo
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:26:46 PM
WOW! I love this one Maryanne. The composition is a story in itself, a long journey, division of thought, grass is always greener...
This is a wonderful image, I would like a copy for myself! Well done.
-Al
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| Photo By: Maryanne Murillo
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:24:23 PM
Maryanne, you surprise me, you said everything was dark and gloomy and the colors in this are bursting out in the woods! It would have been cool if the water in the stream was a little less murky, but the tree reflection is great.
-Al
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| Photo By: Maryanne Murillo
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:16:38 PM
Hi Hanna! I wish I could have gotten my face into the reflection...but that would have ruined the picture ;-) Thanks so much for your comments!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:14:40 PM
Ibrahim, thank you for all your great comments!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:13:35 PM
Hi Ibrahim! Thanks for looking at the series and for your nice words. All the best to you!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:12:26 PM
Hi Iman, this is a nice macro with good composition and detail. Well done! All the best to you.
-Al
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| Photo By: Iman Fouad
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 8:10:01 PM
Hi Jefferson, thank you for looking and commenting on the portfolio. Thank you also for your advice about Neat Image, I have never heard of it and I will Google it to check it out.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 7:12:20 PM
Hi Iman! Thanks for your nice comments. All the best.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 6:51:25 PM
Hi Maryanne! Thanks for looking through the new postings and thanks for your nice comments. All the best.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 6:51:00 PM
Hi Maryanne! Thanks for looking through the new postings and thanks for your nice comments. All the best.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 6:50:40 PM
Hi Maryanne! Thanks for looking through the new postings and thanks for your nice comments. All the best.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 6:49:27 PM
Maryanne, thanks for looking through the new posts. I am sorry to hear that you weren't happy with your weekend shooting. Maybe you can do a series on "gray and gloomy" if you can find a thread within the photos? All the best to you!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 3:59:34 PM
Emiliano, thank you so much for your comment!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 3:03:22 PM
Yasuyuki, thank you for the kind words.
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 3:02:47 PM
Yasuyuki, thanks so much for your advice. All the best to you!
-Al
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| Photo By: Alan Shaffer
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 2:43:46 PM
Love it! The composition, detail, and color are excellent in this one. Well captured again Nicole!
-Al
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| Photo By: Nicole Marcisz
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 2:43:01 PM
The composition, macro detail, and color are excellent in this one. Well captured Gennaro!
-Al
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| Photo By: Gennaro Guarino
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 2:42:36 PM
The composition, detail, and color are excellent in this one. Well captured Nicole!
-Al
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| Photo By: Nicole Marcisz
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Critique By:
Alan Shaffer (K:5873)
12/20/2006 2:41:42 PM
The composition, macro detail, and color are excellent in this one. Well captured Marcello!
-Al
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| Photo By: marcello pisanu
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