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Critique By:
Jon O'Brien (K:11321)
8/25/2004 7:39:50 PM
Hello - I found this to be sort of an interesting shot (taken from the window of a moving vehicle?) I don't think it is one of your best. The tones are muddy and the overall image is lacking in sharpness and interest. I tried playing with it in PSP and wasn't really satisfied with my results although I think it did benefit from from some manipulation of brightness and contrast.
I find, too, that while my attention is drawn to the bits of red and blue against the bridge, they are too small and indistinct to say what is going on, so that rather than being an interesting element they become more of a distraction.
Finally - the areas of fine detail appear to contain some jpeg artifacts, suggesting to me that you have perhaps reduced the file size too much when saving it.
Cheers,
Jon
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