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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
1/29/2005 1:05:05 AM
Thanks for the feedback Mark. It's really helpful to get pointers on this site. All the best, Liane
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Critique By:
Mark Hamilton (K:8387)
1/26/2005 9:12:23 AM
Hi Liane.
Congrats on tackling such a tough subject you have handled it admirably. The exposure is spot on with good detail in highlights and shadow areas.
The one thing the image lacks is a focal point as there is no real place for my eye to rest which results in the picture being busy.
Simplifing the image by concentrating on certain elements within the scene may have also helped in producing a stronger photograph.
It's still a nice interpretation of the urban landscape.
Regards
Mark
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Critique By:
Gilberto Santa Rosa (K:11147)
1/13/2005 3:08:25 AM
Great composition and lights!!!
A wonderful study about lines!
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Critique By:
moataz k. elkateb (K:4971)
1/2/2005 12:00:28 PM
wow ..what a wonderful shot...great composition and lighting...Ilike the angle very much..
well done.
moataz
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Critique By:
Bahadir k (K:8825)
1/1/2005 9:42:00 PM
nice textures,lines and forms combined very well
eye-catching
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
1/1/2005 7:53:57 PM
Great composition, so smany colours, shapes and lines - excellent
Margaret
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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
12/3/2004 10:42:50 PM
Thanks Pat. Unfortunately I don't develop the images myself, I haven't found a place that teaches color developing. Do you do your own developing? Thanks for the suggestion; I've never used slide film. Regards, Liane
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Critique By:
Patrick Ziegler (K:21797)
12/3/2004 7:48:50 PM
Liane: Excellent color and detail in this one! Great Macro. Are you processing your own film or do you take it to a lab? Either way you may want to try some color slide film. I only say this because that's what I did on a sugestion of another member and was astonished at the quality difference. Excellent shot!
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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
12/3/2004 6:34:09 PM
Thanks Pat. It was a scan of the negative.
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Critique By:
Patrick Ziegler (K:21797)
12/2/2004 11:16:52 PM
Liane, Very cool shot of the nareld tree roots. Is this a negative scan or a scan of the print?
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Critique By:
ISMAEL MARCOS (K:10535)
11/23/2004 6:55:57 PM
I'LL TRY TO GET A GREAT DETAIL BEST. THERE ARE THREE OR MORE IN YOUR SHOT. SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH. REGARDS.
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Critique By:
Jim Loy (K:31373)
11/23/2004 6:17:07 AM
I am not a fan of PS and such but I was drawn to this image. The title made me think of things once new, fresh... and I see it was in Shhcaga! I was just there over the weekend with my wife. Great city!
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
11/21/2004 6:01:11 PM
Great perspective and shadows
Margaret
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Critique By:
Rima Dario (K:4427)
11/21/2004 5:59:57 PM
Ottima e in B W ????.
Ciao Dario
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Critique By:
Bryan Steffy (K:4910)
11/16/2004 6:13:55 AM
digital is a must for self portraits...can you imagine the amount of film it would/did take... wow... and your most welcome...good job!!
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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
11/16/2004 4:33:45 AM
Thank you for the kind comments. I?m pleased the lighting worked out?I will have to thank my parents for the eyes as I had nothing to do with that. 
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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
11/16/2004 4:31:20 AM
Thanks Bryan, your generous. I haven?t even attempted to count how many shots it took to get an acceptable one. Definitely not something I would try without a digital.
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Critique By:
Alain Mijngheer (K:11733)
11/15/2004 9:14:14 PM
Beautifull and well captured self-portrait. Great colours too.
Nice meeting you btw.
Grtz,
Alain
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Critique By:
Dmitriy Margolin (K:2351)
11/15/2004 6:28:47 PM
Bright, soft and very pretty colors !! Great use of contrast !! it is like a rising sun !! I like it very much !! Great close up !!
Dmitriy !!
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Critique By:
Dmitriy Margolin (K:2351)
11/15/2004 6:26:54 PM
Very, Very interesting view !! Abstruct and magic !! Very good balance of light !! Great Work !!
Good Luck to you , Liane !!
Dmitriy
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
11/15/2004 5:08:31 PM
Great lighting, wonderful portrait, excellent composition and amazing eyes, and porcelain skin
Margaret
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Critique By:
sezai (K:410)
11/15/2004 10:08:38 AM
good lıghtenıng, beatiful face,attractive eyes..it is a good work
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Critique By:
Paolo Longo (K:4570)
11/15/2004 3:48:29 AM
With those eyes we need sunglasses!!!
;-)
Congrats
pao.lo
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Critique By:
Bryan Steffy (K:4910)
11/15/2004 1:52:47 AM
i throw away all of my self portraits, i never achieve success. NICELEY done Liane great job...
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
11/15/2004 1:19:12 AM
Gosh, what a wonderful shot, Liane!
Soft key light, dramatic and strong rim light and wonderful eye highlights. Nice!
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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
11/15/2004 1:16:37 AM
Thanks Martin, I should have taken the wall tapestry down before shooting. My PS skills are a bit weak at this time but I will be working on the modification. Thanks, Liane
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Critique By:
Liane Doxey (K:197)
11/15/2004 1:14:13 AM
Great advice Charles, I will work catchlights and perhaps update the photo on my profile. Thanks, I appreciate it. Liane
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Critique By:
Martin Halley (K:580)
11/15/2004 12:37:23 AM
A lovely portrait with masterly lighting but rather spoiled by the red bubbly bits in the top right hand corner. Take those out and you have something special.
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Critique By:
Charles Donaldson (K:107)
11/15/2004 12:30:15 AM
Nice photo Liane, self-portraits aren't always easy to do. The lighting is nicely balanced. Perhaps you could remove the catchlights from the irises of your eyes and just leave the ones in your pupils, one highlight in each eye looks more natural.
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Critique By:
Don Lankerd (K:227)
11/15/2004 12:10:12 AM
Ahh yes....Your ARE a beautiful woman!
Very easy on the eyes
Don
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