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          Critique By: 
             CorrieLynn Jacobsen   (K:9882) 
              9/23/2005 1:20:03 PM
  
			I love the composition in this, very unique!
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          Critique By: 
             Jin Kang   (K:1022) 
              6/26/2005 6:55:10 AM
  
			Reminds me of Mimi from the Drew Carey show.
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          Critique By: 
             Carol Cefalu   (K:8388) 
                 6/24/2005 5:17:08 AM
  
			ARE YOU GETTING READY FOR SURGERY?
  JK....Cute face and shot!
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          Critique By: 
             Gustavo Scheverin   (K:164501) 
                 6/23/2005 1:52:31 PM
  
			Interesante retrato... Felicitaciones!
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          Critique By: 
             Chris Nichols   (K:7068) 
              6/23/2005 1:10:58 PM
  
			Very cool portrait!  Nice tone and great subject!  Well done.
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          Critique By: 
             gary spillane   (K:1617) 
              6/23/2005 12:44:14 PM
  
			no I didn't, but  a great idea thank you 
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          Critique By: 
             Pablo Cabrera   (K:492) 
              6/23/2005 12:48:33 AM
  
			did you test this one on b&w??
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          Critique By: 
             ISMAEL MARCOS   (K:10535) 
              6/22/2005 10:57:46 AM
  
			:-)
 
  ISML.
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          Critique By: 
             Olga Vareli   (K:22477) 
                 6/2/2005 11:58:44 AM
  
			people in the USA are so free, this is what I admire the most about this image!
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          Critique By: 
             Nuno Borges   (K:1570) 
              6/1/2005 2:10:36 PM
  
			Streets do talk, you only have to listen.
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          Critique By: 
             gary spillane   (K:1617) 
              5/30/2005 9:31:20 PM
  
			the crop is very nice, definitely places more focus on the subject, which was my intent when taking the photo, thanks  
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          Critique By: 
             guido pasta   (K:71) 
              5/30/2005 9:13:22 PM
  
			Excellent!!!
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          Critique By: 
            Carlos    (K:12969) 
                 5/30/2005 9:13:00 PM
  
			A good grab Gary? ironic, funny! I initially agreed with Keith comment about the bike distracting from the central idea but I?m not so sure anymore - the bike could very well add to the story? Still a crop may work better. The enclosed attempts to flesh out a bit of what I see? Hope you don?t mind ;-)
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          Critique By: 
             Olga Vareli   (K:22477) 
                 5/28/2005 8:15:21 AM
  
			wonderful, brilliant, gothic!
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          Critique By: 
             Mark Sherman   (K:15669) 
              5/26/2005 9:27:07 PM
  
			Was looking at the harsh and forgiving hair, the spikes and then I saw the heart.  LOL and touching.
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          Critique By: 
             Tiro Leander   (K:19060) 
              5/22/2005 5:54:19 PM
  
			haha, this is truly a great shot!
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          Critique By: 
             Franz Thoma   (K:3365) 
              5/14/2005 2:03:52 PM
  
			Quite a funny picture - they really love her, what will she be like when they are finished? Kind regards Franz
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          Critique By: 
             Marco Donatiello   (K:12147) 
              5/13/2005 7:29:47 PM
  
			Very good!
  Ciao
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          Critique By: 
             Frank Beer   (K:10112) 
              5/13/2005 1:30:20 PM
  
			Very nice making of!
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          Critique By: 
             Todd Miller   (K:16464) 
              5/13/2005 3:57:51 AM
  
			lovely geometry and a lovely girl.  makes for a great shot.... i wish the lower right corner didn't have that distraction behind the girl however. all in all a wonderful shot. todd
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          Critique By: 
             Edward Molnar   (K:2903) 
              5/10/2005 9:12:14 PM
  
			Firstly, I'm happy that you've turned from digital towards analogue! Analogue has soul! About this image, the b&w is a good idea, the tones are nice and the panoramic cropping works well. It's good that the girl looks from right to left. But its bad that we can see a little part of someone's head, that there's a black dot above her shoulder, and I fell that it would be better if her head wouldn't overlay the edge of the window. Without these it would be a perfect image! Anyway, keep on working, learning and experimenting. Thanks for your comment! Best regards, Edward
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          Critique By: 
             Reza Fakhrai   (K:3014) 
              5/8/2005 11:39:49 PM
  
			You have a very diverse and fantastic b&w portfolio. This is no exception. Great b&w film choice (especially opting for the 800). Nice job.
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          Critique By: 
             Reza Fakhrai   (K:3014) 
              5/8/2005 11:38:05 PM
  
			Wow! The composition is stellar! It's too bad there's another girl behind her! Nice job.
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          Critique By: 
             Hamed Moshiri   (K:210) 
              5/6/2005 3:22:10 PM
  
			It's nice. It has good compotation.
  Hamed
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          Critique By: 
             Supriya Rao   (K:130) 
              5/5/2005 11:06:58 AM
  
			ha ha nice one! cropping to include the some of the trees adds to the intimacy of playing chess.
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          Critique By: 
             Mark Beltran   (K:32612) 
              5/5/2005 4:50:35 AM
  
			Interesting photograph. The geometry of the windows is nicely offset by her presence. Kind of enigmatic, too. 
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          Critique By: 
             Keith Ruddell   (K:3570) 
              5/3/2005 5:41:59 AM
  
			great shot!! .. I might prefer a slight crop.. I find the bike to be distracting
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          Critique By: 
            Carlos    (K:12969) 
                 4/26/2005 2:49:08 PM
  
			I?ve been thinking of series of ?domestic images?Gary and I had a kitchen shot in my mind?s eye which was curiously composed so like the one presented here ? there is something wonderful and loving about someone preparing a meal? ;-)?  Charming woman shown? fine picture.
  C 
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          Critique By: 
            Carlos    (K:12969) 
                 4/26/2005 2:39:39 PM
  
			;-)))
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          Critique By: 
             Alessandro Raso   (K:2239) 
              4/25/2005 10:33:16 PM
  
			simpatica  cattura!!!!!
  un saluto ale!
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