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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/21/2005 4:31:39 AM
ON my next summer trip to your neck of the woods I will have to stop here and redo the image. Its only about 6 minutes off Route 10. Maybe Ill split the image before after. As I told the park rangers, "If I hadn't been here before in the summer, I'd think this was a great place to live!"
Thanks for looking. JB
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| Photo By: John Bohner
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/21/2005 4:29:36 AM
The positioning of any singular item in a photograph is always a matter for reconsideration. I will not lose sleep over this one though, the better image is still in the can as it were. I shot film as well and the film shots were a few minutes later and were graced with sun the improved the scene IMHO. Thus I will get to argue the composition again in a few days or a week.
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| Photo By: John Bohner
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/18/2005 6:08:11 PM
You sure got the most out of that hour Laurie. I can't decide which I like best.
JB
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| Photo By: Laurie J. Herndon
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/18/2005 6:05:41 PM
Here I sit at work, a mere 2 hours from those flowers and I can't get out to make pictures.
Dang! Very nicely done. I'd like to make one that good. I can't critic the flatness like David did as my work monitor really really bites.
JB
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| Photo By: Laurie J. Herndon
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/18/2005 4:36:23 AM
George is looking pretty relaxed for a guy with a broken leg. Must be good medications! I see a lot of stuff in that image that I don't know how to decribe but its all good. Hope he gets well quick!.
jb
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| Photo By: Roger Williams
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/18/2005 4:33:15 AM
Foregound is a bit dark. Maybe if you used a flash?
jb
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| Photo By: Agust Agustsson
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/16/2005 8:14:20 PM
Pefect! You should be very proud of such a wonderful image. Into my favorites!
John B
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| Photo By: Gábor Koscsó
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/16/2005 8:10:30 PM
Of your 3 images on this subject, I like this one the most. Perhaps because of memories I have from standing among trees in such weather. The clarity of the foreground tree reminds us of the cold clear air so that we can better appreciate the blowing snow moving in the forest.
Nice job, good feelings, well crafted, and better that you froze to take it than me.
John B
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| Photo By: Bob Smith
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/13/2005 2:35:55 AM
Thats a bit different for you, or of your recent work anyways. Nice. I like the soft colors and the atmosphere icluding the rain drop splashing. Two small points though. He needs a catch light in the eye and I think its actually a hippopottomus (however its spelled) and not a water buffalo. From that rainy day at the zoo series, eh.?
jb
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/12/2005 2:39:12 AM
Thats gotta hurt! Great capture though. I wonder what the pitcher thinks of the image?
jb
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| Photo By: Dan Arthur
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/12/2005 2:36:16 AM
Deep seated social anxiety no doubt. While you are speculating, why are the children not content with the mother figure and seeking out the male?
I guess they are greating father, home from the factory.
jb
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/12/2005 2:28:40 AM
I like this one best of the recent series Don.
jb
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| Photo By: Don Loseke
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/11/2005 3:51:00 AM
I think its a three dimensional model of a seal lion's lower intestions? Or a series of Kazoos melted togethet in the desert sun? A scale model of a a Venusian fangle blaster?
Let us know what you find out.
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| Photo By: Roger Williams
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/8/2005 3:23:35 PM
Even correcting for the tilt, your stars are up-side down! (;->) - JB
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| Photo By: Ian McIntosh
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/8/2005 3:19:56 PM
Evangelos - As good as this picture is, and it is very good, I am fascinated by your main subject and the light coming in over his shoulder. A think a really strong protrait could be worked her by moving in closer or cropping. I've added a crop to illustrate my point. Good stuff indeed.- JB
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/5/2005 9:50:58 AM
A bit of honesty may be needed here Roger. I messed up on this image. First off, I had been playing with camera settings so this was accidently shot as a small, highly compressed jpeg instead of the prefered large size Raw format. The sky was white so I PSed in a poor hazy blue.The tones on the Buddah are real. It was in shade so I used the on camera flash to fill in. Exposure was manually set to make the exterior parts of the image properly exposed with the flash filling in the interior spaces. Just thought I'd share. The Leica IS very flexible and the optics challenge me to stress them. Thanks for commenting - John
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| Photo By: John Bohner
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/4/2005 12:37:01 AM
Well crafted. Its sometimes hard to bring out detail in fire and you have done well. - JB
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| Photo By: Sandra Berry
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/3/2005 5:00:59 PM
Simply superb! I appreciate the thought and work that went into this. You may be very proud of your work! - JB
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| Photo By: Ben Goossens
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/3/2005 4:49:00 PM
I am still stunned with the green. Enjoy. JB
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| Photo By: Don Loseke
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/3/2005 4:48:03 PM
Okay, but by spring you may lose the blue sky!
jb
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| Photo By: Roger Williams
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/3/2005 4:46:29 PM
I can see it in my minds eye, a group of usefilm enthusiasts drinking tea and causing the locals to wonder what is going on. Look nice even in this season,Roger. JB
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/3/2005 4:44:36 PM
Roger - Its been a long time since I was in the soup but as memory serves, this looks pretty good! And no fingerprints!
JB
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/3/2005 6:13:58 AM
Sorry, that makes my eyes hurt! Cool idea though.
John B
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| Photo By: Agust Agustsson
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
3/2/2005 11:59:16 PM
Don, Its nice to see that Arizona got green as well as the California Mojave. Greatshot, sorta classic Az! JB
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| Photo By: Don Loseke
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
2/28/2005 10:42:04 PM
Woderfull light and well captured. God use of cropping. - JB
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
2/28/2005 10:36:13 PM
Thanks for sharing Don - I guess I will do the same. - Jb
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
2/21/2005 3:13:08 AM
You musthave had fun in Gila Bend! Again, you've done a first rate job. - JB
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
2/19/2005 6:08:22 PM
You are right. The image is weak and it needed to much PS. Its more important to me because of the subject. This winter's rains may go into the history books so I am glad I got to see it. Thanks for stopping by. JB
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| Photo By: John Bohner
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
2/19/2005 6:04:47 PM
You have a wonderful porfolio and are an artist. I liked Park Bridge best. I don't think the bird added much here. Wrong type of bird, wrong emotional context. Now a swan! That might be magnificent. Great job sir. JB
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Critique By:
John Bohner (K:8368)
2/19/2005 5:56:44 PM
I did not have Infra-red with me on any of my trips up there. Now I have to make another trip!
I have been doing IR in Death Valley but this image of yours is great! The trees seem very dark in the foreground. Are you certain this is IR?
Excellent image in any case. - JB
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