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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/18/2008 4:32:56 PM
Paco, just noticed this.......thanks, but why?
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| Photo By: Paco Ferrer
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
3/3/2006 8:24:18 PM
great work!
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Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
3/3/2006 8:20:24 PM
nice to see you Chuck!
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| Photo By: Chuck Freeman
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
12/1/2004 4:05:22 AM
Thanks Kevin,
Thats sort of what Ive been trying for in my work lately.
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| Photo By: paul shelasky
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
10/18/2004 1:05:29 PM
a.e.- thanks so much for the insightful comment
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| Photo By: paul shelasky
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
7/18/2004 3:53:18 PM
You do excellent work. Very emotional work that i can relate to. Paul
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
6/28/2004 8:05:41 PM
Matej, good to hear from you! I just thought it was a cute image, if cute is the right word. I agree though with your comments. I may be a bit rusty in that I hadnt been shooting much lately. I had four rolls of film and only felt a couple things were worthy of printing. See" dog in window". I do seem to be more happy with my work when I can see some part of myself in the image, whether obvious or not. If that makes sense. Look for darkroom photos soon. Paul
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| Photo By: paul shelasky
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
6/28/2004 7:52:19 PM
Matej, good to hear from you! I just thought it was a cute image, if cute is the right word. I agree though with your comments. I may be a bit rusty in that I hadnt been shooting much lately. I had four rolls of film and only felt a couple things were worthy of printing. See" dog in window". I do seem to be more happy with my work when I can see some part of myself in the image, whether obvious or not. If that makes sense. Look for darkroom photos soon. Paul
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
6/22/2004 5:49:05 PM
Matej, great work. I've finally figured it out as to what this is, but it's so effective as an abstract this way, I dont really want to know what it is. Paul
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| Photo By: Matej Maceas
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
4/25/2004 3:52:53 PM
nice work!
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| Photo By: Paco Ferrer
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
3/18/2004 4:23:35 AM
Matej, I agree with you. The tilt was intentional on my part. Who kows why we make certain decisions when we shoot an image. If you notice the image tilts in the direction the one way sign is pointing. The straigtened version just seems so static to me, no? I wish you could see the actual print of this. Maybe a trade?
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| Photo By: paul shelasky
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
3/16/2004 4:38:58 AM
Terrific image. I like how the waves seem to be converging in the middle of the image. One of my favorites.
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
3/16/2004 4:37:00 AM
John I like the experimentation and the thought process behind it. Well done. Paul
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/27/2004 7:10:59 PM
A classic series!
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/27/2004 7:08:05 PM
For an image of buildings, there seems to be so much movement.
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/27/2004 7:05:10 PM
I agree, your use of shadow and light is excellent. Funny image. how do you like that meter?
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/24/2004 3:09:43 PM
I like how the plants above them appear to float.
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| Photo By: Matej Maceas
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/22/2004 6:04:55 AM
Matej, this is my favorite of this series of images. Nice job using the green filter.
The only part to me that is a bit distracting is the snow in the upper corners. I know you said you burned it in some, but maybe a little more would keep my eye from wandering up there and lingering. The square format works really well here, I see youre using a Kiev 88. For the price the russan cameras are definately under appreciated, I feel.
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| Photo By: Matej Maceas
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/19/2004 4:29:47 PM
Great feel in the image. If i may suggest one thing- do you think the feeling of motion might be enhanced even more if there was an area in the photo that was sharp? That way, it mightwould contrast with the motion in other parts of the image. How do you feel about this? Paul
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/19/2004 4:25:32 PM
Brian, an excellent use of light during this time of day. The rim light makes the difference for me. Did you shoot more than one frame from this vantage point?
Just curious.
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 11:28:40 AM
Matej, I might agree with burning the stone at the top a little bit. I intentionally printed the right side a bit darker to keep the emphasis on the urban accessories wording. The detail on the right side comes through more on the actual print.
The fed 2 is fun to use, excect the lens diopter keeps moving on me once I set it.
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| Photo By: paul shelasky
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 8:16:44 AM
I like the idea, but there is a bit too much camera movement. Something in the frame needs to be sharp as a focal point, no?
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| Photo By: Paola Pandolfini
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 8:10:57 AM
Nice work. Though getting a bit closer and eliminating some of the distracting background would help a little.
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| Photo By: Mel Labrador
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 8:07:24 AM
Hey joel. Got any new work to show? The angle of this building is interesting.
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| Photo By: Joel Bonda
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 8:01:22 AM
Interesting angle. Very nice work and love the camera.
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| Photo By: Cary Shaffer
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 7:58:41 AM
Nice image and camera also. My only comments would be maybe a little lower angle to limit the white space between the bench and church and to have waited a bit for the epople walking into the frame to be more towards the left side for compositional balance.
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| Photo By: Tim Hoogendijk
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 7:55:22 AM
Nice street image. A day in the life.
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| Photo By: Emanuele Calvagno
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 7:53:43 AM
Just when I thought this building had been shot from all possible angles. Nice job.
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 7:49:44 AM
Terrific images in this series. Makes me wish i'd thought of it.
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| Photo By: Brian T. Ach
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Critique By:
paul shelasky (K:1211)
2/8/2004 7:45:43 AM
I like the composition
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