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Critique By:
Geoffroy Demarquet (K:186)
4/8/2005 3:36:13 PM
Great... i really love it
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
3/31/2005 7:34:52 PM
This is defini9tely your best. It6 kinda reminds me of ME when I was a young lad.. Except this little boy does not seem shy like I was. Nice.
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Critique By:
Laura Spell (K:24080)
3/20/2005 12:52:28 PM
Adorable child. The expression is one of pure joy! Light seems just a tad bright IMO.
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Critique By:
john shi (K:80)
3/20/2005 2:25:45 AM
nice shot, lovely boy. maybe you can darken the green background a bit, make it less stinging.
just my humble opinion :p
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Critique By:
Reza Fakhrai (K:3014)
3/19/2005 12:34:58 AM
Nice skin tones though, since you've opened the floor for criticism, I would like to see the skin a little more saturated, especially for digital. Just my humble opinion. I like the expresion you've caught him in, though.
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Critique By:
Enas Moussa (K:7470)
3/18/2005 11:13:24 PM
how handsome he is..
very cute..
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Critique By:
Dorothy Di Liddo (K:13787)
3/18/2005 10:38:23 PM
What a cutie!!! beautiful blue eyes.  Dottie
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Critique By:
BRH BRH (K:-210)
3/17/2005 9:36:44 PM
Wonderful expression
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Critique By:
Sean Nel (K:557)
3/11/2005 11:31:15 PM
Hi Marcy
I think for me the big thing missing in this image is the lack of catchlights in the eyes. They seem a little lifeless so to speak. I think Richard made a valid comment about the composition of the photo, but I wouldn't have cropped it as severely as he has. I would have only pulled in the left edge so that the boy is looking into the image.
I don't think that it is a 'bad' image though.
Best regards
Seano
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
3/8/2005 9:54:50 PM
I am not sure there is anything needed, unless trying to make it "Colder" to fit expression.
Nice
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Critique By:
B:)liana (K:30945)
3/7/2005 6:19:27 PM
Excellent portrait and B&W!
Biliana
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Critique By:
Richard Demanowski (K:674)
3/6/2005 6:48:16 PM
"Come on guys! I need to know why this image isn't GREAT. What should I have done to improve?"
My opinon?
Your subject is too centered in the frame, for one thing. I'd crop it in significantly from either the left or the right. You'll get a different effect from each side, depending on what kind of mood you want to generate.
Also, the lines in the bricks are too angled for my taste. I'd rotate to get them more parallel to the top and bottom of the frame. Because of the perspective, they can't be perfectly parallel, but I think a little *more* parallel would make them much less distracting, and help them focus more on the child.
Here's my take:
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Critique By:
Sean Nel (K:557)
2/26/2005 2:57:30 AM
Marcy, this is such a lovely image. Love the clarity and the saturated colours in this. His expression is beautiful and so natural. You are talented!!
Best regards
Sean Nel
PS I will respond shortly, still trying to get my head around a couple of things... Moving home in a few days, so things are mad. :P
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
2/20/2005 8:18:49 PM
Wonderful shot of a grand old House.
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
2/20/2005 8:18:06 PM
Nice shot and good imagination.
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Critique By:
Sean Nel (K:557)
2/11/2005 4:36:43 AM
Marcy, this is lovely. I love the saturation in the colours and your POV is delightful! The softness here is lovely too and he has a lovely expression. A truly sentimental image!
Best regards
Sean
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Critique By:
Christy McCullough (K:914)
2/11/2005 2:08:32 AM
this is just charming!
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
2/10/2005 10:23:27 PM
beautiful and yes looks like he's having the time of his life there. excellent.
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Critique By:
Marilyn Nagy (K:6008)
1/27/2005 2:38:38 PM
Marcy, Really like the angle of your photo. The texture could be better if you only did it on the sky only to keep the clarity of the effect of the statue. I also like the B & W statue with beautiful colored sky. Marilyn
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
1/26/2005 10:21:11 PM
This is a great photo also. Very moving indeed.
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
1/26/2005 10:20:13 PM
A very effective photograph and really like texture
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Critique By:
Tiger Lily (K:10966)
1/24/2005 5:49:21 AM
Looks almost real. I like the framing.
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Critique By:
Tamara N (K:2617)
1/23/2005 7:36:53 AM
This is very sweet. The DOF is very nice on this, as is the pleasant blue sky behind the statue. It looks like a nice afternoon, but it is certainly a little sad where you found this.
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Critique By:
Stephen Bivens (K:7308)
1/23/2005 6:59:45 AM
I have the real thinker. Take a look. This is a great shot.
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Critique By:
Stephen Bivens (K:7308)
1/23/2005 6:56:37 AM
Great stuff ! Ck out some of my cemetery shots.
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Critique By:
Marcy Massura (K:1848)
1/9/2005 8:17:19 PM
Yes Linda you have my permission to use this image for the booklet.....please send me a copy if you have the chance. I would like to be credited as well.
1417 Whitecliff Way
Walnut Creek, CA 94596
Thank you and good luck on this project!
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
1/6/2005 5:00:24 AM
Very nice, Marcy. I love the subtle colors of this photograph. This is a house we would have called "haunted" as kids.
Came here to check your portfolio after reading some of your forum posts...
Hope your show went well.
Best
Dave
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Critique By:
James Philip Pegg (K:10138)
1/5/2005 5:41:03 PM
Beautiful composed and colours!
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Critique By:
Marcy Massura (K:1848)
1/5/2005 5:07:06 PM
Thanks Joe- I am surprised how much better it looks being straightened out! Thanks for your help.
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Critique By:
Joe Teng (K:16723)
1/5/2005 4:31:29 PM
This is what i have done. Hope you like it!
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