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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 11:08:55 PM
This is fun. Alot happening in this pic...the Elvis pic makes the shot. Kewl.
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| Photo By: Oliver Dienst
(K:452)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 11:08:02 PM
It's offbeat. I like it.
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| Photo By: Anthony Gargani
(K:4527)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 11:07:20 PM
Where the hell was this one??? VERY cool framing!
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| Photo By: Michelle S
(K:3)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 11:03:54 PM
Interesting, but lacks the punch you were going for. I like the negative space, but crop tighter and add some more contrast for heavy blacks. Then we'll get the feel.
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| Photo By: Anthony Gargani
(K:4527)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 11:02:50 PM
Marc,
This shot is blown out....and call me, will ya???
Jim
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| Photo By: Marc Crumpton
(K:1)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 11:01:56 PM
Sai,
That was cool!!!!! I didn't do anything to the wall as I wanted to stay true to reality. Photoshop is pretty rare in my shots unless it's saturation or blemishes. I do like the variation, tho!!!!!
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| Photo By: JL Photography
(K:288)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/22/2004 5:53:44 PM
GREAT portrait! Lighting is perfect, has pizzazz....love it!
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| Photo By: Arthur John Grossman III
(K:1214)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
3/3/2004 5:06:03 AM
Marc,
Great shot of Kelly...like the mood, and you nailed the composition. Photoshop out the bucket in the background. ;-) Look forward to seeing more!
Jim
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| Photo By: Marc Crumpton
(K:1)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
2/14/2004 3:36:57 PM
Gorgeous.....poster worthy. Wonderful!
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| Photo By: Vince Cianci
(K:2505)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
2/1/2004 9:45:32 AM
Michelle, given the digital you're working with, the fuzziness doesn't throw me. Her face looks a bit choppy, but this is a nice shot once cleaned up. Learn some basic photoshop to clean the hair up. Scan some of your print shots, too, so people can see clear pics whereas the low grade digitial doesn't do yur work justice. Way to go...you're on your way!
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| Photo By: Michelle S
(K:3)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
1/31/2004 10:07:12 AM
It's a snapshot. So what?
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| Photo By: Luciana Barletta
(K:161)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
1/31/2004 10:01:57 AM
Gorgeous....bravo!!!!
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| Photo By: Andrea Biscosi
(K:5387)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
1/31/2004 9:59:13 AM
Her hands look awkward, and way too much jewelry. her expression is also somewhat blank. Like the sepia, very attractive model. Would like to see a better version of this set.
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| Photo By: Augusto Buffa (Ali)
(K:10454)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
1/31/2004 9:57:03 AM
Gritty editorial...I like it alot. Love the texture to the image.
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| Photo By: shelby koning
(K:5450)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
10/12/2003 1:08:12 PM
Great composition, simpllistic beauty in all it glory. Love the off-kilter, amkes me want to see more of her. The model is perfect for this shot. Wonderful!
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| Photo By: Christopher Cato
(K:311)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/29/2003 7:43:11 AM
Altaf,
My company name is JL Photography. I work in the banking industry and I do not wish to draw attention to my side business for obvious reasons. Hence, I use my company name to keep Yahoo searches and such away from my photo-work. (A guy put my name in Yahoo and found my work; I was called to HR as a result. Try putting your career on the line to convince you.) So, my full name is not and cannot be used for that reason. Sorry.
Jim
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| Photo By: JL Photography
(K:288)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/29/2003 7:18:34 AM
Hey all,
Thanks for the feedback. A word about the bottom part of the photo as a conscious decision was made about it. I did crop that out as I also wanted the consistant blow-out behind her, but then: her hips looked reeeeeeeal wide. (crop it with your hand and you'll see) I found THAT affect much more distracting; so I kept her hips intact to keep her slimmer.
Another note: I was balacing over a triangular jacuzzi with a silver reflector in the left hand and the D100 in the right. Acrobatic photography is the best! ;-)
Keep the comments coming and thanks!!!!!
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| Photo By: JL Photography
(K:288)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
8/29/2003 7:17:53 AM
Hey all,
Thanks for the feedback. A word about the bottom part of the poto as a conscious decision was made about it. I did crop that out as I also wanted the consistant blow-out behind her, but then: her hips looked reeeeeeeal wide. (crop it with your hand and you'll see) I found THAT affect much more distracting; so I kept her hips intact to keep hr slimmer.
Another note: I was balacing over a triangular jacuzzi with a silver reflector in the left hand and the D100 in the right. Acrobatic photography is the best! ;-)
Keep the comments coming and thanks!!!!!
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| Photo By: JL Photography
(K:288)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/26/2003 4:13:29 PM
Nice portrait with real emotion. I like that you didn't get tempted to smooth her skin out with PS...I'm all about reality. Nice work.
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| Photo By: Arthur John Grossman III
(K:1214)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/26/2003 4:10:23 PM
For a snapshot, I like the clarity. Try and get the entire body in for better effect. Nice cat. ;-)
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| Photo By: Q Q
(K:16)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/13/2003 7:33:13 AM
Very unique lighting...seems to be happenstance. Somewhat dark, but I like it. The overtones have a greenish tint to it...intentional?
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| Photo By: Zelda Zabrinsky
(K:3036)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/13/2003 7:31:37 AM
kinda spooky, rather than "awwwwwwww". Sends a mixed mesasage.
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| Photo By: josé girbes
(K:374)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/12/2003 5:53:31 AM
POWERFUL. Tells a sad American story. Once upon a time, this was a beautiful woman. Wow.
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| Photo By: Gregory Fiedler
(K:15439)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/8/2003 5:11:29 PM
Gorgeous light, and wonderful use of space. Good to see ya.
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| Photo By: Rene Asmussen
(K:138)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/8/2003 5:03:28 PM
Wonderful photo...I love how you framed this shot....so much to look at, so many stories.
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| Photo By: Joao Vasconcelos
(K:2163)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/8/2003 5:01:24 PM
The intense stare makes up for the lack of focus (which I assume was the intent...). Love the lighting. Thanks for being different!!
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| Photo By: Julie Buckwald
(K:526)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/8/2003 4:55:12 PM
Great capture!!!! (Sucks to be that fish.....)
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| Photo By: Andre Knudsen
(K:124)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/8/2003 4:54:33 PM
Very sharp...great contrast of colors. The horizon/plane is off kilter a little.
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| Photo By: Robert Whiteman
(K:2201)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/5/2003 1:06:40 PM
Too much Photoshop to understand what the shot is.
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| Photo By: Mats Lindfors
(K:9)
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Critique By:
JL Photography (K:288)
7/5/2003 1:00:14 PM
Perfect and well executed. This is better than any stock photography or catalog shot I've seen. BRAVO.
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| Photo By: Flavio Ortolan
(K:907)
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