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Critique By:
Matej Maceas (K:24381)
6/8/2003 8:48:30 AM
I like the blur, it makes the picture dynamic and helps the viewer vividly imagine being in this situation. I don't find it easy to portray dogs in full motion, but you have done it well with this image. Considering the tightness of the crop at the bottom, I think it's actually quite good that the ears have been cropped off as well. The light reflecting in her eyes gives her a truly concentrated appearance.
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| Photo By: Afzal H Mohamed
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Critique By:
Matej Maceas (K:24381)
6/8/2003 8:48:16 AM
This photo has a lot of empty space at the bottom, but is very tight at the top - there's little room above the dog's head. I think you should have pointed the camera higher. Also I would have liked the photo taken just a moment later, so that the dog's head would be in front of the pole rather than partially hidden behind it. The lighting is quite fine.
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Critique By:
Gregory McLemore (K:35129)
6/7/2003 11:40:13 PM
Good action capture.
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Critique By:
Leslie Cohelan (K:20807)
6/7/2003 11:34:38 PM
the blur from the motion doen't really hurt the pic that much, but the lack of ears on the dog does...if the ears wer included then I might suggest a vertical crop to ad a bit mor drama to the picture
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
6/7/2003 11:12:49 PM
superb.
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Critique By:
David Rogers (K:1082)
6/7/2003 10:37:22 PM
Nice capture... good find.
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Critique By:
Alpha Centauri (K:754)
4/18/2003 11:51:39 AM
This is a good attempt at dynamic composition, yet it could be better. The dog is too centered vertically. If you had raised your camera a little, the dog would have been more dynamically positioned, you would 've lost the distracting bright spot at the lower left corner, and the top of the bushes in the background wouldn't have been cut off as it is now.
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Critique By:
Rob Patrick (K:2177)
4/12/2003 1:34:03 PM
Good use of colors and composition.
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Critique By:
Jeff (K:499)
3/8/2003 8:24:08 AM
keep in mind , the higher the f number, the greater the depth of field. Shooting macro your DOF is so shallow any way, but is this same shot was shot at a f16 you would have twice the dof. Love the water droplets.
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Critique By:
JoydipSuchandra Kundu (K:582)
2/28/2003 10:35:09 AM
Light allover except on the subject, fill-in flash next time please. Also take care about the "over-exposure".
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Critique By:
Burkhard C. Schipper (K:71)
2/25/2003 1:28:02 PM
Although the photo has some obvious technical weaknesses, it is a very nice photo. I like such photos very much.
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Critique By:
Todd Miller (K:16464)
2/21/2003 5:16:49 PM
nice lighting indeed. I'd rotate the image to match up the corner and the edge of the picture.
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Critique By:
J (K:2647)
2/21/2003 12:34:03 PM
The light is nice, but I'm not sure I really like the angle.
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Critique By:
eyad shammari (K:391)
2/20/2003 1:23:03 PM
nice colours.
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Critique By:
Megan Forbes (K:4617)
2/20/2003 1:03:53 PM
Wonderful colours and contrast! My attempts at shooting out of a plane window have been dismal failures so far, with reflections coming off the inside of the window.
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Critique By:
Valeh B (K:890)
2/20/2003 11:04:10 AM
I like the angel and the idea however I believe the drops should have been sharper with better focus! Great job!
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Critique By:
R Pires (K:445)
2/17/2003 12:12:52 PM
Exactly with little detail, it is a very pretty photograph. love of this backlighting.
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Critique By:
R Pires (K:445)
2/17/2003 12:12:16 PM
Exactly with little detail, it is a very pretty photograph. Taste of this backlighting.
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Critique By:
Megan Forbes (K:4617)
2/17/2003 10:24:15 AM
Hi Afzal,
I like this shot, although it is perhaps a little dark. The reflection in the water is lovely.
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Critique By:
Anindya Maity (K:7880)
2/17/2003 10:20:33 AM
This is a good semi-sil.The composition charms with its simplicity and the ripples on the water with the shadow are just great.The water hyacinth balances the boatman nicely.I don't like the caption though ,for it doesn't really fit with the pic that looks more moody than portraying a hard life.
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Critique By:
sam clements (K:265)
2/16/2003 10:56:40 PM
great colours in the background, i didn't know you were allowed to take photos on the plane last time i did my camera was confiscated!
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Critique By:
Alan Sislen (K:649)
2/16/2003 11:02:28 AM
Afzal, a little bit of fill flash would probably do the trick - maybe -1.5 to -1.7 flash exposure compensation if your flash is capable of those adjustments.
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Critique By:
Marc Gougenheim (K:5398)
2/10/2003 10:27:24 AM
I'm not too well versed in this kind of photography, but here is what I'd say:
Good technique. I like the very blur background and very sharp foreground. Good composition too, with the animal on the right and an interesting foreground.
On the negative side, maybe this "all-brown" feeling in the frame doesn't really help the animal stand out - but that's quite minor to me. What I find a bit more problematic is the face that the face is in the dark, with overall too much contrast and too much shadows on the main subject.
That's all I can say, and it's still a pretty good shot, and probably the best you could take there, at that time, under this light... Best regards.
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Critique By:
Greg Smith (K:99)
2/10/2003 10:14:03 AM
Your correct...the sharping add a lot of zing to the photo
and cought my eye in the first place...nice editing.
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Critique By:
Afzal H Mohamed (K:909)
2/10/2003 9:44:38 AM
Never this lucky...dont be modest Verna..you work is nothing short of amazing! you're right...i went overboard with the sharpen...i just kinda liked the extra highlighting! here is the non-sharpened image...
thanks and regards
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Critique By:
Verna Absolutestockphoto (K:2836)
2/8/2003 4:36:56 PM
Good Candid shot....deer didn't seem to know your there...
Good timing. I am never this lucky. Unusual white highlighting to the subject...was this a bit over sharpen?
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Critique By:
Afzal H Mohamed (K:909)
2/8/2003 10:13:28 AM
thanks for the comments everyone...mum was looking away/ looking at me with an expression of utter disdain so i thought i would leave her out of it...should have taken a few with her too.
Vince i will heed your advice on being creative on the location from here on.
thanks again
cheers
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Critique By:
Vincent K. Tylor (K:7863)
2/7/2003 12:24:52 PM
I agree with wanting to see Moms face also. Still, a nice capture...very sharp. Almost looks like a human baby.
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Critique By:
Anindya Maity (K:7880)
2/7/2003 11:42:36 AM
Good pic.I'd like to see the mother's face though.
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Critique By:
Deleted User (K:4598)
2/7/2003 5:06:51 AM
Besides all the technicals being in place a warm, pleasing capture.
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