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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/24/2004
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A brilliant photo (pun intended).
I like the glow coming from the harsh light.
My suggestion would be to dodge the shaded eye a little, to make it more visible. My preferred tool for this in Photoshop is not dodge, but instead use a brush with Soft Light mode selected, a smooth edge, and opacity turned way down...to about 15 percent.
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Brad Nirk
{K:142} 4/11/2004
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Well Drew, I'm 18 and I'm still a senior in high school. When I do go to college I'm planning on studying digital arts. We'll see how it goes from there.
Thanks for the comment Dmitry.
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Dmitry Gringauz
{K:1157} 4/11/2004
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The light is good, gray tones are good, the model is great and her expression is good also. Perspective is original, and overall, the picture leaves a good impression.
The picture can benefit from tighter cropping on the top and on the bottom (square format would do well here, the white brick line on the wall is unnecessary), and a better placement of her left hand. Somehow, to me, her left hand looks almost detached, or as if it was someone else's hand.
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Drew Brashler
{K:750} 4/11/2004
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i think i'm getting better. I think i'm goin on a photo shoot with laura (the same girl) tommrow. so hopefully that will work out. I'm hopeing that wasnt a one time luck type thing. man i didn't even notice i was on the feature crituqe thing untill you told me... that was cool to see. So what are you studing in college, and how old are you?
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Brad Nirk
{K:142} 4/11/2004
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Hehe yea, Well I just started posting here. I'd stop by every now an then...until I saw your picture on the "featured critique" and realized how much I'm slackin...hahaha.
I just realized that I need to open up my horizons and show others my pictures. Besides, I think you get more better critiques here, at least there are more for me to critique. So I figure I'll start.
I'm doing good, I hope you're gettin better.
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Drew Brashler
{K:750} 4/11/2004
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OH JEEZE man!! i didn't know you were on here till i saw this picture. hahaha oh man. thats funny. how ya doin? for some odd reason i don't remember seeing this one from antishift. this is a very nice one. Its cool the glow around her, its like angel like, and you have good clarity in the eyes. very very nice. *clap clap clap*
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Ron Beezley
{K:2834} 4/11/2004
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Interesting...
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