Side by side along in the sand, They walk without a sound, The gentle rays of the setting sun, Blowing kisses all around. Within their hearts a love so strong, But still the fear runs deep. Will the love they have withstand the test, Or forever it's loss they weep? A small face turns up to meet the smile, Of a similar yet stronger one. And all the fears that fill their minds, Disappear with the setting sun. Two hands are joined as the sea and the sand, Forever to be entwined. The loving hands of father and daughter, A stronger love you will never find.
With the apparent Post Scriptum work... feel that the background horizon could use some attention... to allow the eye to concentrate upon the apparent real focus point of Father & Child...
Evoking a smile with both the image and story around it. You do a good job making it look very 50's the muted colours and vignette are wonderful. I think he needs a bit more sun though heh