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Mal Zecevic
{K:142} 7/26/2003
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i love the idea of the composition. almost a battle of lifestyles if you will. one is smoking and blowing her smoke out looking @ the other female like what the hell is she doing as the other one is in a dream world almost suggestively with the way shes looking up. i really dig the idea on this.
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Keith Banham
{K:1306} 7/15/2003
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Matthew, This is a cool shot. I've seen people work a lot harder to get a lesser image. As Mary said, maybe a slightly different crop would improve it even more. Cool.
PS. I love your self portrait too. I tried one of me but you're better looking.. Damn you lol :)
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Jamie Ferguson
{K:6284} 7/10/2003
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Don't put yourself down so much Matthew, this is a great candid moment and given the fact that it was bloody dark its come out really well. The title makes it, you've got a steady hand and a nice eye.
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Patricia Gerstel
{K:437} 6/18/2003
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You could try using photoshop to fix the image up. but good catch i still get alot of emotions from the subjects.
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matthew kinslow
{K:2525} 6/17/2003
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Here in North Dakota... Nope don't have anything really to do... but yeah I explain a lot that way people can give me a good critique of my work I figure the more they know the better they can judge it... I'm mostly here for the knowledge.
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MaryBell
{K:32791} 6/16/2003
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Matthew,
I think that perhaps you explain too much and sell yourself short - this is a wonderful shot - I wouldn't want the lighting different - the darkness is suggestive and the light that does exist has a warm tone...
I would crop a bit more from the bottom and the right...
btw you don't have much to do, do you? North Dakota!!
Mary
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Anna Aichinger
{K:4921} 6/14/2003
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nice shot...i like the expression of the girls...
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Stuart Boyle
{K:1505} 6/10/2003
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Good job considering the situation; the mood is great and leaved the viewer in thought! I think that the light could have been a tad brighter but the darkness adds to the atmosphere. Congrats on a another good capture.
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Luis Costa - Lucaz
{K:9205} 6/9/2003
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Very nice work, regards!
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 6/9/2003
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superb.
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Paco Ferrer
{K:8586} 6/9/2003
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Good Atmosphere!
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