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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 3/29/2007
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I think you cropped it the right way on the first try. But the shadows should have gone "bye-bye".
:) :)
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Janet Garinger
{K:900} 3/29/2007
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Jan: Here is the original.
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Janet Garinger
{K:900} 3/29/2007
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Thanks Jan. The spots on the lower left are shadows. I wanted them in but probably could have cropped the picture better so that it was obvious that they are shadows. I appreciate you r feedback, I am pretty new at this.
Janet
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 3/29/2007
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Janet -- Excellent colors and geometry. Two things might have made it slightly more visually powerful (but only maybe):
1. The window looks like it was taken from a slight angle; this could be straightened in a photo editor.
2. The red in the lower left looks like it is smudged or blotched; that too could have been replaced with the surrounding red.
That said, depending on what you want to achieve and your approach to how you might draw the line (no pun there) in using editing software, it is still visually strong and pleasing to view.
--Best to you, Jan
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Mustafa Tayar
{K:2212} 3/29/2007
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Hi, Janet..
Very nice view, and beautiful composition...
Red colours and window has a beautiful contrast... I like it...
Congrats...
Mustafa :)
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Billy Bloggs
{K:51043} 3/29/2007
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Great, like the ever so slightly off centre composition and the colours speak for themselves..
Regards, Gary
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