Well, this is easy to "critique" First of all, anyone could have done this even me, who's not even a photographer. i dont know why you would do this as a senior portrait, this makes her almost unrecognizable, when her photos should be taken to document a time in her life that's most important. It makes no sense. You can't see her nose, and theres too much negative space on the bottom. the shot doesnt make sense. i saw your link from carol cefalu's page, and for you to critique her senior portraits in that way, you have a lot to learn before you can tell her how to do something. obviously you have NO CLUE what you are talking about. Maybe if you came at her in a different way you might have been able to learn something. I know i have learned a lot from just looking at this website, i do it for fun, but boy you take it wayyyy to seriously for you to be telling other people how to do something and you have no clue how to do it yourself. there's my "constructive critisism" Have a good day, Candace
WOW..got a job at a studio huh? Seems to have gone to your head don't ya think???
Try working on your own portfolio before critizing mine. You telling A professional (who happen to have HER OWN studio) how to use photoshop..... (in such a rude way) Its funny. It's always the Below average wannabe photographers who like to critcize others because of jealousy OR WHATEVER. Carol
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