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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
3/2/2004 9:14:32 AM
I like the crop on this photograph - however, i'm not keen on the grain - a little would be good - i find it loses appeal being too grainy - but that is a personal preference. Great looking model - very intriguing
kelly
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| Photo By: Vladislav Hahn
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
3/2/2004 9:10:47 AM
I like the lighting you used on this shot - the reflection of the single light in your subjects eyes and the shadows - very dramatic.
kelly
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| Photo By: Malgorzata Golab
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
3/2/2004 9:08:33 AM
This is a beautiful shot Luca - i'm curious if you used any photoshop aid in getting the sky all that colour, a partial filter or if it is au natural - either way it is beautiful
great job! Kelly
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| Photo By: Luca Miarelli Mariani
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
3/2/2004 8:56:23 AM
Nice shot Hans - I like the lighting in this photo, the reflection of the water on the knife.
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| Photo By: Hans Driesen
(K:64)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
3/1/2004 3:18:20 PM
Great shot Jorge, it reminds me of a part of highway here in British Columbia that we call the Fraser Canyon. I enjoy the depths of the mountains in the background.
Kelly
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| Photo By: Jorge Vasconcelos
(K:33746)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
3/1/2004 3:16:04 PM
This is a great shot Robert - a true Seaman - as we all remember as kids - something like Captain Highliner - white beard, hat, golden tooth - You captured something here. The photo looks a bit grainy - however - it adds character and age to an ageless photo.
Great Job
Kelly
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| Photo By: Robert Elias
(K:1281)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
2/29/2004 10:30:49 AM
Beautiful Capture Gunter - I like the angle you took it at, showing the reflection of the sun on the wall. The mist/fading clouds adds mystery to the shot!
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| Photo By: Günter Koth
(K:13841)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
12/22/2003 10:31:28 AM
Once again, an awesome shot Stephen - the mist adds to the colour texture of the photograph. Very serene!
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| Photo By: Stephen Smith
(K:861)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
12/20/2003 2:05:36 PM
WOW - excellent DOF - great capture - your timing was perfect - lighting perfect - the lighting between the mountains in the background add to the natural surroundings of the owl's environment! Awesome job - keep up the great work.
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| Photo By: Miguel Lasa
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
12/20/2003 2:00:49 PM
a beautiful shot using the natural light. excellent job. i look forward to seeing more of your work here at usefilm.
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| Photo By: Stephen Smith
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
12/19/2003 1:56:46 AM
For those of us living on the West Coast - it is photograghs like yours that remind us how fortunate we are to have such beautiful surroundings!
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| Photo By: John Reed
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/14/2003 7:33:54 PM
Excellent photograph Gaetan- you are very fortunate to live near or in such a beautiful city as Quebec City! Your photograph of the fog over the St. Laurent river is almost haunting - but in a good way... keep up the great work!
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| Photo By: Gaetan Chevalier
(K:4188)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/14/2003 7:30:34 PM
Excellent Photo!... I love the fall leaves framing the Chateau.. however, I find the lamp post at the bottom middle right of the photo with the yellow "flag" distracting - it tends to pull my eye away from the chateau and the leaves. Perhaps editing it out through a photo program will enhance an already beautiful photo.
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| Photo By: Gaetan Chevalier
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/12/2003 9:32:01 PM
Mari.. what a beautiful shot - excellent colour tone!
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| Photo By: Mari Mar
(K:11469)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/5/2003 3:20:32 PM
excellent photograph... very appealling...i love the mist in the background, the reflection in the foreground... absolutely stunning!
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/5/2003 2:02:27 PM
great shot Kelly. I've enjoyed looking at your work. Your model is having a ball..and I hope you had just as much fun taking the photo! Keep up the great work
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| Photo By: Kelly Abrams
(K:233)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/4/2003 5:03:03 PM
this is spectacular Stuart. Excellent Macro photography. THe reflection in the drop is phenomenal!
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| Photo By: Stuart Boyle
(K:1505)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/4/2003 5:00:38 PM
an excellent photograph Stuart. The hazy day adds dimension to the mountains beyond. The reflection in the lake is wonderful. very nice - thank you for sharing
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| Photo By: Stuart Boyle
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/4/2003 4:56:43 PM
you're right - focus is not always important... your photograph gives us that sense of all of our 1st steps - being out of focus gives it that sense of motion that taking your 1st steps bring.. it would've been nice to see better your little one's facial expression - he/she looks a little apprehensive! thanks for sharing.. what does he/she think 10 years later? 
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| Photo By: Stephen Hickel
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
10/3/2003 8:01:38 AM
an excellent photo George, the composition I think is great the impact of the footprints and the shadow is what appeals to me about the photo. Excellent shot!
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| Photo By: George Fay
(K:262)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
9/30/2003 10:03:50 PM
a phenomenal photograph... macro at its best. An awesome job.. thanks for sharing your work!
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| Photo By: Alan Orr
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/24/2003 10:15:37 AM
wow! an awesome job. B&W was definitely the right choice - it adds a nostalgia to the photograph and highlights the drama of the sky! excellent job Beverly!
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| Photo By: Beverly Gustafson
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 11:07:07 AM
She is a cutie Richard!
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| Photo By: Richard Scherzinger
(K:5)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 11:05:43 AM
wow! great use of photo program - at first view I thought it was snow on the ground and leaves! looks fantastic and is probably as nice in colour and plain black and white.. keep ironing out.. you're doing a great job!
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| Photo By: James Langford
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 11:00:08 AM
wow -- great use of the natural light - i love the shadow banked onto the building! very effective - excellent work
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| Photo By: j r
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 10:54:19 AM
Hi Kelly - great capture of their personality - My only suggestion would to keep in mind the rule of thirds - although the background is nice - moving your subjects slightly to your right might have been more dramatic - the tree wouldn't be so distracting behind the girl's head... you might have been better to use the tree as a framing object rather than a background. or try leaning your subjects to the side of the tree so you're taking a side view picture of them.
for a beginner you have a great eye and well on the way - keep up the great work!
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| Photo By: Kelly Abrams
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 10:50:13 AM
Kelly I just saw one of your other portraits and decided to look at more - you have an awesome eye for photographing people! I love this silhouette.. something I'm still trying to master! great job
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| Photo By: Kelly Abrams
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 10:47:01 AM
Hi Kelly - I like your composition on this photo - very natural - very intimate between mother and son (?) - Unfortunately I think you had your camera on autofocus which has left the little guy slightly blurry and the leaves in the background in perfect focus... I would also suggest having not cut off the women's elbow. It is great to use natural light like you did - however, it perhaps is a little too harsh on the women's face and on the young fella's head- you can see a definite ridge in his haircut which distracts looking at the shot a bit. However, you've got a great eye - keep up the good work!
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| Photo By: Kelly Abrams
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 10:39:04 AM
A beautiful Shot of Julie - I really like the work you did on the colours - makes the shot that more impressive! Excellent Work Louise
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| Photo By: Louise Vessey
(K:13862)
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Critique By:
Kelly Pater (K:615)
5/23/2003 5:39:25 AM
Excellent work - the lighting is beautiful and an excellent job in keeping the composition in focuse - expecially with the lighting conditions. Wonderful job - Best of luck in your photography!
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| Photo By: Hayri CALISKAN
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