City - Denver Studio State - COLORADO Country - United States
About
a design i came up with the other day while on the mountain, looking at this kids extreme goggle tan, thinking yep, this is what we all look like going back into the office after playing hookie on a powder day... everyone says, sick huh???? yeah right, so this add is for the essence of snowboarding, done as a portfolio builder, using the dragon name for study purposes only, i am however going to try and contact them to see if they would like to use any of the adds ive been doing, or hire me as a designer, wish me luck, and let me know about this one, good bad, anything i could do better???
As for alternatives, you could consider a prefect half of the face on the left, and maybe provide direct eye contact there as well? Has a strong commercial (ad) feel to it.
I just like it!Simply, clear and straight to the subject (in ur case the clothes cause I don`t see the snowboard or a little even it is saying in the title something about.
Cris
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Kelly {K:20268} 3/29/2005
hey hey... this is good, simple and a huge statement.... well done.... i really like what you have done here.... great job phil.... GOOD LUCK..... that would be awesome to land a job with them, keep us posted... kel