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BILL MAHLER
{K:5882} 11/28/2004
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Good job Ed ......Only thing I would give you a tip on is: women tend to tilt their head to the higher shoulder .... so in this situation, .. while looking at her on your screen.. cup her head in both your hands and tilt her head the same distance .. to the left. There is a certain way the head should be .. for reasons. The way her head is here. is kinda girlish/teen...... tilted the way I sugested.. she looks like a woman....Play around with it Ed .. see what you think.
She is a beautiful woman and model..... Take her over to the window and use window daylight on her face... you'll love it Ed.
On another point .. like in your bio... I came into "digital" kicking and screeming. I miss film.
~~~~~~~~~~~ Warm Regards ...... Bill
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Matt Hopson
{K:1340} 11/28/2004
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HI ED
This is not a portrait attempt, as you have titled it. It is a portrait period. The only thing I can see wrong with it is that it could be about 1/32 or 1/64 of an inch to the left, lol !
Good shot pal.
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RAY CHARLES
{K:2731} 11/28/2004
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Very nice portrait, excellent colors and details.I see you have a 10D now.
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William Berkowicz
{K:364} 11/27/2004
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Pretty expression of your model.
The eyes "smile"
the texture of pullover contrast with picture and i like it
Very good attempt
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Dave Stacey
{K:150877} 11/27/2004
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Excellent job, Ed, especially considering the lack of additional lighting!
Dave.
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