Andrew, you need a little bit of practice at this wedding stuff i think. On the plus side, you got decent exposure on them under difficult lighting conditions (i hate to think what i would have done in such a situation--major silhouette!) On the down side, uh, they look about as interested in each other as two old marrieds after about 20 years of looking at each other over the kitchen table, her fingers are wet (???), he looks like he's about to step on her train with one foot, his other foot's cropped off and nobody seems to be aware that the wedding photographer is trying to capture their special moment for posterity.
i'm real glad you're getting this work and someday, when you're the hottest wedding photographer east of the Mississip', you'll look back and remember your early efforts..we all have to start somewhere and you got lots of guts and lots of talent. Keep shooting and let's see these happy couples! best regards: kat~
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