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John Hatz
{K:156973} 7/11/2008
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it's very importante here the colours of the kid's clothing and his toy... because of the softer colours around you have a very good contrast for your main target... and that is an excellent element for me.
be well Ali!
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ali ikizkaya
{K:11418} 5/2/2008
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Dear Arif!
Thanx so much. I am trying to learn from the friends like you.
Best Regards
ALI
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Arif Ertan Ersoy (aersoy)
{K:27380} 5/2/2008
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very good shot from a nice angle with good colours! i like the motion in it!
the best,
arif
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Mitra Nademi-Nassari
{K:28234} 4/29/2008
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I can see that Avi has already answered your question on frame/color. He is right on the spot on that and I don't have much to add to it. Have a wonderful day, Ali.
Warm regards,
Mitra
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Avi
{K:70138} 4/29/2008
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I think it's mostly the color. Contrasting color frames are ok, but you have to choose the shades very carefully. In my opinion, this particular shade is not going well with the photo. You can also consider a frame all around instaed of just the top and bottom (that concept is more pleasing for horizontal mode pictures)
best,
Avi
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ali ikizkaya
{K:11418} 4/29/2008
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Dear Avi!
Thanks so much for your critique. Yes you also right as people said about this stupid red frame made by ALI. It just break the all meaning of this shot. I will be happy if you respond me . What is wrong; the color or idea of making a frame.
Thank so much again for your critique for correcting me.
Best Regards
ALI
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ali ikizkaya
{K:11418} 4/29/2008
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My Dear Friend Mitra! Thank so much for your second critique. You are so kind and noble for trying to understand me. I must accept red part of the picture is not a good idea. But I have a question for you.
The color or adding a colored sections to the picture. Which one is wrong.
Warm Hugs.
ALI
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Avi
{K:70138} 4/28/2008
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very good, spontaneous street scene.. one that oozes with life... only thing that could have been avoided is the red frame.
best,
Avi
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Mitra Nademi-Nassari
{K:28234} 4/28/2008
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Thank you so much, Ali for your kind greetings. I appreciate that very much. In this photo, I don't mind the wires at all just the borders. Actually the wires have added charm to this photo by showing the kid's obstacles and overcoming them on his way to achieve his goal of safely running the kite. Great composition, indeed! Have a wonderful day, Ali.
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ali ikizkaya
{K:11418} 4/28/2008
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Dear Jen
Thanks for your critique
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ali ikizkaya
{K:11418} 4/28/2008
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My dear Jen!
Thanks so much for your sincerely critique. Yes as Mitra you right. But I had no chance to change environment. Sorry I have no body who critique me before publishing my shots. Now I am lucky having a friend who critique me here. Sometimes I am doing that kind of mistakes. I am happy you loved. Thanks so much again.
Very warm hugs. Say my salutations to your respectful dady
ALI
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ali ikizkaya
{K:11418} 4/28/2008
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My dear friend Mitra
Thanks so much for your sincerely critique. Sorry I have no body who critique me before publishing my shots. Now I am lucky having a friend who critique me here. Sometimes I am doing that kind of mistakes. I am happy you loved. Thanks so much again.
Very warm hugs. Say my salutations to your respectful dady
ALI
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Jen van Wijn
{K:24075} 4/28/2008
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Great image dear Ali, wonderful composition!
But I do agree with the electric wires and the brown
borders, maybe better without:))
Big hugs my friend, Jenxx
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Mitra Nademi-Nassari
{K:28234} 4/28/2008
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Nice shot with great colors, Ali. Hope his kite didn't tangle up with all those electrical wires. Bless his heart. I like the photo but am not very fond of the heavy reddish orange/brown borders that you have on top and the bottom of the photo.
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