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Sergio S. Silveira
{K:761} 5/25/2008
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Some disconcerting thing exists in this picture and I like this. Regards. Sergio.
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11321} 8/31/2007
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I'm not sure what to say. I wondered if moving the camera up a bit would change the composition of it. Anyway - it's a great idea... and my critique may not be the be-all and end-all either. :-]
Jon
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Elizabeth Allen
{K:403} 8/31/2007
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maybe if i took out the red apple
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Elizabeth Allen
{K:403} 8/31/2007
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hmm im not sure. your right
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11321} 8/31/2007
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Ain't that the truth? But I think that it loses something in the composition. It isn't really apparent at first what is going on, so that one loses the contrast between the ripe, juicy perfect fruit and the poor deformed one. I'm not sure what to suggest, but I think that a different arrangement would have made the point more strongly.
Cheers,
Jon
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