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Gail Solvang
{K:314} 9/18/2006
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I prefer this of the four because the full frame of all the items seems to make for a better composition. Also, the reflection on the table makes the image all the more interesting. Nice work! Sorry for the delayed critique, my daughter and I are still under the weather :(
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Dave Stacey
{K:150877} 9/18/2006
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I pick this one as well, Hilton! The actual garments are a little easier to pick out, and the background works well with it.
Dave.
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 9/18/2006
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You can see more in this one hil ..lovely layout ..nessa
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Joe Johnson
{K:8529} 9/18/2006
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I think this shows an obvious compositional angle, or curve, which is good. I would echo some other comments about some slight cropping, diffuse light, etc. One might play around with a second or third light source, as well, and consider the reflection and reflected colors. I still think that this, too, could use more depth of field, whether by dragging the shutter or using a software photo blending.
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Lori Stitt
{K:75282} 9/17/2006
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This one is nice, like it the best for composition, could even crop from the bottom a bit more.
How about softer lighting? Bounce flash? Window?
Cangle?
Also think the rose would be better if it were angled a bit, rather than straight towards the viewer. (Because it's such a bright color, the eye tends to go to it first, it competes a lot with the other elements.)
Have a GR8 day,
Lori :)
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ana ribeiro
{K:21290} 9/17/2006
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well first when i saw i didnt like them they are 'kitsche' but for the purpouse maybe they are ok.
good luke
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Rashed Abdulla
{K:163889} 9/17/2006
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I would recommend this photograph out of the series.
I can see much better lay out here and with stronger composition, more into technical lights at different zones given a lot of pleasant drama to this image.
I also find that is a very great saturated colors and more pragmatic details.
The rest is all yours my friend and I wish you all of the best
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hdw Photography
{K:6630} 9/17/2006
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Thks Laura....this one is my favourite aswell....was just messing around with the rest....wishes
Hilton
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Laura Spell
{K:24080} 9/17/2006
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This one is better at presenting the lingerie IMO. The bra is prominent. Light, color, and details are good throughout.
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