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Rocky Berlier
{K:2009} 7/17/2006
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Eric, I love all your work but this one seems to really stand out. It's not just the great composition and lighting but the focus is impeccable as well. I remember having see the print of this how impressively sharp it was. This would probably look nice as a B&W too. Excellent work.
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Eric Benson
{K:384} 7/17/2006
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Thanks Danny.
Eric
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Danny Brannigan
{K:19523} 7/14/2006
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Nice one Eric. Great exposure.
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Eric Benson
{K:384} 7/13/2006
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Wouter,
Great critique, I will try out your ideas. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.
Best wishes,
Eric
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Eric Benson
{K:384} 7/13/2006
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That is a light house at Jones Beach, Long Island, New York. Thank you for your comment.
Eric
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Wouter van Noort
{K:4369} 7/13/2006
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I like the simplicity of the composition. It has just the elements it needs. Since this is a CC image i will do my best to include some suggestions for improvements:
- moving one step to the right would have positioned the footsteps more in the left corner, leaving a more diagonal line.
- there is some object growing out of her right shoulder. It would be nice if you could remove that.
- The colors are a little dull (compared to the other beach shot in your portfolio). I think you should either adjust the white balance or adjust the colorbalance (probably more yellow).
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Cathy Carroll
{K:28144} 7/13/2006
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Lovely skin tones, simple composition. Love the footprints. It looks like she is heading towards a baby's bottle. Is it a building on the horizon? Cathy
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