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deniz cesmeci
{K:5726} 2/3/2006
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thanks for your comment i think you paid attention on the photo "my room" . you had seen also the irontabel congrs. buti think you didnt see somthing ...... and if you are going to look my image again you will see that my lamp is off . so i take this image with my Flash in to the hell dark room therefore is the contrast difference . thanks for your nice comment have a nice day see soon deniz cesmeci
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naftali raz
{K:1819} 2/3/2006
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thank you very much Deniz. i appreciate your detailed critique. indeed i wish i had a wider and faster lens mounted when i spotted that guy (and a tripod too and a touch of fill flash under the visor of his cap) i should have also selected a shallower FoV with a sharper focus on the face. the unclear cardboard box doesn't bother me. it woudl do well enough as a hint. in sum, quite a few things i would have done differently.
but... such is the sporting life in the street ;) i had to work with what i had ready. it was also one of my first days with that camera, so i was still fumbling the buttons.the way things are in parsi, i suspect that guy will still be standing there next year at the same time. so all i need to do is to show up.
i agree about red - it pops up in the images but like anything else it can get overworked.
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deniz cesmeci
{K:5726} 2/3/2006
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great capture i think red is your best yoloour or ??? Am I right? nice shot but i think the contrast is a littel bit high . and i think it will be better if you had used another lens . becouse this lens is for zooming and wenn you use this lens then it focus on the place wich you want and and this image i can see the karton (the box)is unclear .okey it s nice the backround is unclear so you can say this is my object but the box is un clear and clear its mean its a littelbit clear it makes a problem on there that you make a mistake but its actualy not so its not your problem the photo is taken very well but you choose a fault lens .is my opinion naturly . if i were you i had use a other lens . ratherthen ; this image is a cool image the colours are very well the compositio and capture is good selected. congrs. best regards have a nice day waiting for comments see soon deniz cesmeci
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naftali raz
{K:1819} 2/3/2006
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Salam Kambiz, thanks for your kind remarks.
Raz is a common Israeli name and it also means "secret" in Hebrew. it is rarely used in modern Hebrew; a more common word for secret is "sod"
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Kambiz K
{K:37420} 2/3/2006
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Salam great candid image. I love it. I have a collection more than 45 images in my portfolio! I am sorry are you Pakistani origin? Because Raz has a meaning in my language (Farsi) means secret.
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