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Stephen Bivens
{K:7308} 7/29/2004
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Very.
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Mirjam Letsch
{K:117} 7/21/2004
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But, if constructive remarks is what you want: one way - in my opinion - to improve this photo is to make at least sure the cleavage is perfectly vertical. The model rests too much on her leg with her breast. Good luck with your work.
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Mirjam Letsch
{K:117} 7/21/2004
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Jason, my intention is not to 'dig at you' and be 'cruel', but this page is meant to give reactions and my reaction is not a positive one... I get negative remarks as well! In fact, my reaction was pretty serious: for ME the photo doesn't work. Maybe for others, it's beautiful! The first remark was of a person who liked it! You can always remove my remark and leave the positive ones ;-)
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Ron Stowell
{K:171} 7/21/2004
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If what you want is nothing but positive comments, then I won't comment.
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Jason Hargreaves
{K:6} 7/21/2004
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I think your comment was a little out of line, I do not leave comments with such a negative connotation. If your intent was just a dig at me then please refrain from such demeaning acts of cruelty and post positive comments that people can use to improve their work!!!!!
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Mirjam Letsch
{K:117} 7/20/2004
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Jason, to be honest, this picture doesn't 'work', at least not for me. The pose nor the model are seducing. To me it looks more 'funny' than 'seductive'. Or maybe it was meant to be a joke? No, I don't think so....
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Jason Hargreaves
{K:6} 7/20/2004
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Thanks for the suggestions, D70 = Great, Fun, Simple to use
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mandy welsh
{K:3146} 7/20/2004
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nice job, nice expression. just not sure about the cropping either more in or more out. Background works nice. And maybe even a soft focus would help the moment, softer lighting. What do you think of your new camera? ~mandy
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