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Antonio Flavio Bonanno
{K:172} 6/30/2003
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You should retake this shot at some other time of the day and next time try to remove the hair from the model's right eye, make it so also the part that now is in shadow will be in light.
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Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 6/30/2003
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You have a beautiful model. Nicely taken. Some tips which could help the photo:
1/ remove the hair from the models right eye.
2/ Shoot this a little later in the day. Use a gold reflector, and get a beautiful warm skin tone.
3/ If you're going to have the model look on the uper right corner of the frame, allow a little more room to the right.
Keep posting!
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Arjen VandeMerwe
{K:796} 6/30/2003
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Nice model, nice surroundings. Great lighting. I wonder how you did this with natural light. Sunlight from the right, flash left from the back?
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Alberto Merlo
{K:249} 6/29/2003
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Mi piace tutto, eccetto che l'espressione: prova a scattare quando non se lo aspetta, a tradimento :-), sicuramente avrebbe delle espressioni pił morbide e spontanee. Ciao
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Maurizio Massetti
{K:30463} 6/29/2003
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Ottima la nitidezza, un po' scontata la posa ed espressione della ragazza, peraltro stupenda... MM.
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Savinelli Lorenzo
{K:2844} 6/29/2003
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bella luce saro' ripetitivo ma sti lavori li vedo bene virati o in bianco e nero gli occhi sono troppo spostati avrei preferito un po meno a lato lo sguardo.-
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Paolo De Maio
{K:34932} 6/29/2003
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bella per dettaglio, luce ed ambientazione.
complimenti Raffaele.
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