BUT, and it's why you picture is so good, here, it works perfectly. Without the factory's silhouette, your picture was a haďku. With it, it is "simply" a poem.
If I should add music to this image, for sure I'd choose the 30 first seconds of Sibelius' concerto for violin.
I hate me not knowing english better : I can't express all I'd like.
But I think the main lines, you'll have understood : This picture is very good.