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Heath Bennett
{K:4429} 3/27/2005
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Great first attempt :)
Perhaps you should have a look through some food magazines, Donna Hay being my favourite for photography style. I'm not a fan of f-stops that are too high also.
I don't give away advice without being wary, but you are my friend! Donna Hay is pure gold - have a look, you will not regret it.
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Jonathan Charles
{K:5248} 3/21/2005
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Brilliant colour-salad but definitely needs F11 and a tripod, or take a separate shot focussing on the strawberries and merge them in PS. If you've got any shot with the strawberries in focus from a similar angle you could fix it easily. (If you email them both to me I'd be happy to show you how).
Best wishes and happy eating! ... Jonathan
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p e t a .
{K:18700} 3/20/2005
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ok ok, but what about the 'great effort for your first attempt'? hehehee
You know I think I'm like one of those skiers I laugh at...has all the great gear and looks the part, but when its time to actually ski they have no idea!
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ppdix
{K:17069} 3/20/2005
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Again, i agree with the previous comments. Everything is focused but the strawberries... And there is a shadow on the mangoes in the back...
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Riccardo Corsini
{K:17796} 3/19/2005
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MhunnnnnHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Da leccarsi i baffi!!!!!
Ric.
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Jason Mckeown
{K:22200} 3/19/2005
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thats what counts in the end
SC is lovin my work must be something in the air at UF :)
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p e t a .
{K:18700} 3/19/2005
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Thanks Jase, yeah I did some with a higher fstop too but I prefer it this way and so did the Chef and he was writing me the cheque!!
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Francesco Martini
{K:12249} 3/19/2005
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Bono!!!..the dessert!!! Very good image and idea!!!
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Istvan VARKONYI
{K:3770} 3/19/2005
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Continue!
Congr.
Istvan
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Jason Mckeown
{K:22200} 3/19/2005
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Is fruit all you got ;)
Really IMO you should have stopped it down to f8/f16 so its in focus right across the plate, do you have a hand held light meter? if so you should be able to get a reading to go along with the fstop your after
all in all a good shot everything is were it should be
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Elahe S. Ahmadian
{K:8695} 3/19/2005
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realy delicious and colorful.
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