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Giuseppe Violetta
{K:156} 6/10/2004
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A great photo; you did'nt need a subject, but only to find a great thouht!!
bye
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Aris Michalopoulos / OsirisiS
{K:1916} 5/16/2004
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I prefer white notebooks but it's your world isn't it? You have a certain style in your portfolio which is going to be more specific in your next uploads. I'll be watching you. Greets from Athens.
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Dustin Cowen
{K:2837} 4/10/2004
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Been there many times. Oh the futility of forced creativity, great concept Adam, I think the picture is strong, but I would agree with Randal about the pen,(very minor) although i have no applicable knowledge to share with you, i will tell you i struggle with harsh shadows constantly, and never see them till its to late...Take care, Dustin..
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Katrin Aasa
{K:740} 4/5/2004
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It's good idea and composition.But I miss some sharpness or I don't see the sharp point.I think the pen is too dark and maybe write some words to the paper...
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Randal Dean
{K:4004} 4/5/2004
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A nice composition, and a good theme. Some detail in the shadow of the pen would be nice, other than that I have no suggestions, good job.
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