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Alexey Sapa
{K:27174} 11/9/2003
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Hi, Elena! First is wonderful! Some wishes had been written above! Very beautiful flowers, but I know that it will be not so easy to shoot them well! If you will try to make a little less exposure, you'll get more details on petals (and It's very well), but the centers of flowers will be not enough lighted, so try to use reflectors (you can use ordinary sheet of paper, it works well, or number of sheets) for passive lighting! I hope (sure) that Everything will be Ok! Two small: When you croppe the object try to use one erase tool or (more right) the tools with similar borders, differently the contour can be not so beautiful! I do like that you had kept stems(not sure that it's stems) and it's very pleasant for me, how frame lines look out through the stems! Yes, I like it! Maybe, try to balance in the bottom part with something, and try to shadows some part of stems with (for example) burning tool! Anyway, I'm very pleasant to see that wonderful shot, really! You had chosen difficult flower and made wonderful picture with very nice composition and made so creatively framing! Let me set only one 6 for lighting, others, in my opinion 7! My best wishes, and I'm very happy that you begin to shoot the flowers! Alexey
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Elena Zabelina
{K:23212} 11/9/2003
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Thank you everybody. I am agree with you. I don't understand now, how could I didn't see that before....
I will try change it.
Elena
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Carolyn Wiesbrock
{K:14051} 11/9/2003
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Well done!
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Pedro Libório
{K:53861} 11/9/2003
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lovely done.
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Andrew Chambers
{K:1271} 11/9/2003
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Great rose image I would take the stems out
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Roderik Koenders
{K:2740} 11/9/2003
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Nice shot. I agree that the stem is distracting and that there is no detail left in the left flower since it is so overlighted.
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Don Loseke
{K:32503} 11/9/2003
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Very good idea. Could be a little less exposure and detail. I agree the stems look like they have been created. I like your idea of the two internal frames. Nice start. Don.
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Ragnhildur Ragnars
{K:1573} 11/9/2003
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Excellent image but I agree with Stephen that the stems don't add it. Just the two flower heads would make a better composition.
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Elena Zabelina
{K:23212} 11/9/2003
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Dear friends, I never did this work with flowers before. It's my first time.
I am appreciate any comments and critique...
Thank you.
Elena
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Stephen Websdale
{K:260} 11/9/2003
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Nice idea and well executed. I am not sure about the stems which I find a bit distracting and unbalancing but a good image - well done
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ayman azraq
{K:284} 11/9/2003
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nice rose i like it
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