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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/31/2006
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Thanks Doyle I do appreciate your time and your more dynamic crop ! You've taken quite a bit of time with many suggestions so after work I will study this a bit better... It's off to work for me now... You're such a talented and generous friend and teacher. Whenever I get it right I will continue to pass on whatever I learn here at UF !!
Happy Halloween,
Michele~
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 10/31/2006
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Hi Michele . . .
Sorry to have been absent so long from your portfolio . . . just too busy. This shot has a great potential and as I saw mentioned in one comment . . . a good eye. The 'eye' can't be bought but looking at UF images does help to perfect it and this was a great find and a great capture too!
The problematic issue here is the top blown-out BG behind the necks of the bottles. Again, given the equipment you're using, I understand that there can be, from time to time, issues . . . but this is not one of those times (IMO). This shot has some very nice potential but I feel it lacks because the crop wasn't aggressive enough. The image . . . a still life . . . is already a bit static just by nature of being a still life . . . and I think had you been more aggressive . . . you could have ended the blow-out and increased the dynamic potential of this shot. I have attached a crop example for your consideration but - be aware . . . it took a great eye to get this find and record it . . . and wow girl . . . you have certainly improved of late! I'm impressed! :)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/27/2006
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Robbie we have sooo many antiques and bottles like this here in Oregon ....
Thank You tho ... I wonder why that is tho ???
Michele~
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Robert Chin
{K:22282} 10/27/2006
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You don`t see bottles like these any more,wonderful image Michele of the good old days!!!!!!
Robbie
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/24/2006
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thank you nessa .... with much appreciation ...michele~
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 10/24/2006
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Good still life ..like the reflections..light and colour ..nessa
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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Must have sent the same message twice sorry.... this is the insane part !
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Martin .
{K:24957} 10/22/2006
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Mich,
Thanks for what?
Martin
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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Thank YOU .... Michele~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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Thanks Martin...
Michele~
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Martin .
{K:24957} 10/22/2006
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Mich,
The crop is spot on... As far as confusion, join the club... I stay that way about most of my captures... ;)
Martin
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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thank you Nacho !
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 10/22/2006
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marvelous lighting. great still life. magnificent.
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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Thank You Martin, I like your version too !
I've been very confused about this image and the crop , so hearing You like it ... keeps me confused!
Thank You for your time to comment , I do appreciate it !
Michele~
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PIERRE THOMAS karkau
{K:2031} 10/22/2006
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nice fashion shot......ptk
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Martin .
{K:24957} 10/22/2006
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Mich,
I love your eye and you can't buy the "EYE"... A bit HOT, but who can carry a diffuser around all the time?
Well seen, nice comp, cropped wonderfully, and the detail is Awesome. I hope you don't mind my playing about, but you know me?
Martin
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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Hi Paul,
Thank You for commenting on this image... I am not real happy with it for the same reason you mention ( altho it is ratan shelving) also the croping of the top of the bottle... had to because of other stuff I couldn't remove ...ha! But thank you for always commenting ! I want to see if you've posted anything yet ..I checked this morning you hadn't ... I am hoping to see another shot very soon my friend !
Best Wishes ,
Michele~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/22/2006
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Hello Ornella,
Thank You so much ... I've been enjoying your pictures very much lately !!
Best Wishes,
Michele~
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Ornella Erminio
{K:4881} 10/22/2006
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 sembra una foto di altri tempi le bottiglie che non ci sono più, bellissime
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ciao
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The Pilgrim
{K:64971} 10/21/2006
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I like the compostion with this Michele. Very well done! The colors and detail are nice and the exposure very good.....:) I would have tried to get rid of the hose in the background however......(If possible)
I love the photo! Very good and very pleasent viewing.....
Congrats!
Paul E Brumit
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/20/2006
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Thank You Ali.... You are very kind and supportive ..I am not proud of this image tho...I think I made a mistake to post it..I could do a better job at another time .
Much appreciation,
Michele~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/20/2006
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Hello Jo,
Thank you for your kind and helpful critique... I agree with your comments and think was a poor job on my part... need to take a break and study !
Thank you for your time !
Best Wishes,
Michele~
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Rashed Abdulla
{K:163889} 10/20/2006
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By all means this is a very great still life and very great light and colors.
1million&1regards my friend
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Jo Sparreboom
{K:145} 10/19/2006
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Hi Michele,
I like the bottles very much! It is always exciting when you see the light reflecting in glass!! Curious to see what the bottles are reflecting . I think I saw the trees from your garden?? Just a minor suggestion for improvement. When you make a crop with the top of the bottle in the middle, in view it might look nicer (?)
And the white of the top of the bottles on the left don't have contrast with the background.
Anyway a very nice picture!!
warm greetings
Jo
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/19/2006
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Thank You ng I appreciate your time and comments.
Best regards,
michele~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/19/2006
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Thank You so much Robert I appreciate your time and comments very much.
Best wishes,
Michele~
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Engy Farahat
{K:11591} 10/19/2006
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Fantastic composition Michele. like the different shapes of the bottles.
excellent lighting. and nice colors. well done
best regards,
ng..
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Robert Kocs
{K:89085} 10/19/2006
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My friend this is very nice shot from many nice old
bottles. The colours and tones are very impressive
so fine still life this one. Lovely idea and well
presented work. Nicely done 7+++
Have a nice day dear Michele,
Robert
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/19/2006
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Thank You very much Gabino Matus Jr
I was just feeling a bit down about my photography skills .... after posting them today and along you come out of ....UF and cheered me up !
Thank You !!!
Michele~
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 10/19/2006
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Thank You Alicia, You are so kind my friend !!
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Gabino Matus Jr
{K:2075} 10/19/2006
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For some reason bottles always make a nice shot. Very nice capture here.
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Alicia Popp
{K:87532} 10/19/2006
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Magnífico bodegón... maravillosos reflejos, luces, brillos!
Felicitaciones!
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