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mohamed ahmed abd el rahim
{K:5753} 8/31/2006
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great shot..nice one point perspictive..nice lines and nice colors
best regards
mohamed ahmed
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txules .
{K:62768} 5/8/2006
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Thanks Hugo, i´ll take it into account; seeing your portfolio i understand you much better: you are a master of landscapes...best regards
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 5/8/2006
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Hi Txules,
Very powerful shot, with a strong atmosphere. The centered compositon works well in this case, as it emphasises the perspective. As to the composition of the horizon, I think placing it on the horizontal centerline, making optimal use of the symmetrical axis of the frame could've made it a tad stronger. I'd go with Petal's suggestion...
Cheers,
Hugo
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txules .
{K:62768} 5/8/2006
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Gracias Josep, se agradece el comentario. La realicé en el camnio de santiago, cerca del Burgo Ranero, hace unos pocos días en un día solitario y espléndido. Un poco de trabajo en PS hizo el resto; no estoy del todo contento con la simetría de los cables pero es lo mejor que se hacer.
Un abrazo
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josep alsina
{K:19880} 5/8/2006
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Magnífica prespectiva de unas vías de ferrocarril con un precioso azul del cielo. Te felicito y te mando un cordial saludo
Josep
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Howie Mudge
{K:27933} 5/5/2006
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A wonderful perspective and the light is goregeous. Your work gets better and better. Horizon is fine for me in this particular instance.
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Yazeed Al Ghuraibi
{K:4588} 5/5/2006
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what a great shot you have here !
love it !
Yazeed
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Partha Pal
{K:11619} 5/5/2006
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Lots od geometry and excellent symmetry
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Jason v.d.Meer
{K:2019} 5/4/2006
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Oooh dear me!. this is awesome. personally i love the "dead" horizon, the juxtoposition works well with the two colours. (my only nit is that the tracks aren't centered)
awesome work my man!
all the best!
j.
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z z
{K:7231} 5/4/2006
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Great leading lines from top and bottom. Like the deep dark blue sky!
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Majed Jarrar
{K:49} 5/4/2006
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wonderful color.
very good sense of perspective ;)
well done.
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Kareem Afifi
{K:5968} 5/4/2006
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very well done
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Galal El Missary
{K:84569} 5/4/2006
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Great tones & prespective , very well taken .
Galal
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Sergio Cárdenas
{K:25028} 5/4/2006
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Buenisima composicion. Gran colorido y una perspectiva sensacional. Me agrada mucho las texturas en PP y la simetri de las lineas con los cables.
Felicitaciones
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txules .
{K:62768} 5/4/2006
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Thanks Petal for your time, may be it improves a bit but the electric lines seems to be asymmetric anyway :)
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Petal Wijnen
{K:50989} 5/4/2006
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A 'solution' after the fact: cropping... You could crop a bit from the right. That way the 'off symmetry' part will shift to the back... It's for you to decide what you prefer... Had a go at it to show you what I mean, hope you don't mind... have a look see... ;-D
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txules .
{K:62768} 5/4/2006
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Thanks Kiarang. Love your portfolio, your picture entitle "alone" is amazing; best regards
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txules .
{K:62768} 5/4/2006
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thanks Petal, very good critic; the question is how can i improve the symmetry using this wide angle lens; i´ve tried with PS2 but the results are poor. Thanks again...
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Kiarang Alaei
{K:49415} 5/4/2006
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You have good understanding about "Lines"
here the perspective is realy eye catch. good exposure and nice work, bravo!
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Petal Wijnen
{K:50989} 5/4/2006
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Great shot!! I'm not sure too... ;-D But I see or rather can understand your dilemma: more sky (2/3) and the railway gets 'compressed' and the other way around the pic gets a bit boring with all that grey gravel... so I think this is the best solution. Great lonely mood, perspective and colors... well captured and next time... get the symmetry completely right... ;-D
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