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Marian Man
{K:80636} 4/14/2006
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great in b/w dear Mark!!!
well done!!!!
Marian
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Mary Slade
{K:40338} 4/13/2006
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Thanks Mark for explaining- get it now. I kept wondering was it the one picture re worked. Don't know what the doorman's prob. was- he should be glad you're advertising the place!
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Mark Sherman
{K:15669} 4/13/2006
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The color version is very close to the original very little crop on that one. This is me lying on the floor using the camera like a periscope. These are hanging from a ceiling, about three stories in height, and this is me looking straight up at them. I was walking around trying to make sure I didn't have any of the wires in the picture.
The doorman wasn't pleased with me, this was a cool place and I didn't fit the image at that moment. :-)
I like the door too, made it feel a bit art-deco, and after all the roundness I thought it might make an interesting break. But no reason not to try it without though.
Thanks for asking Mary
Mark
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Mary Slade
{K:40338} 4/12/2006
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Amazing how different the B&W is Mark. The clarity lighting and textures still brillaint but sadder. It is like a dream through a slightly open door that can't be opened. Did you cut alot and reverse the image sideways?
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Joćo F * Photography
{K:41945} 4/12/2006
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Wonderful composition dear friend Mark S. one of my favorites!!
regards
joćo
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Gabriela Tanaka
{K:16594} 4/12/2006
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Oh, this is quite a different story!!!Very classy and elegant!And like Douglas [Sunset Man] pointed out, the "white window" should disappear, it bothers the eye.You did something very special here!
Regards,
Gabriela
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Mark Sherman
{K:15669} 4/12/2006
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Really like your presentation. The slight grey over by the lower left mushroom I like as in contrast to the black area in the upper right, I feel like it gives a sense of depth if only a little bit. That light bar is actually a window to the outside. I liked it because it's almost a rest area for the eye. I understand though by getting rid of it I can see a nice flow developing too. I was thinking about printing and hanging this one, now I have much more to think about. Maybe a couple practice printings at Kinko's for .99 cents, to get the printed feel right.
Thank you Sunset Man for the time taken, glad you liked
Mark
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神 風
{K:10665} 4/12/2006
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Anyway ... the attached is my conception of how it should be offered for presentation compositionally but at 1600% there is background work which needs to be faded further to B&W for printing ... Yes/No?
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神 風
{K:10665} 4/12/2006
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Mark,
I took a peak at your colour version with a totally different composition which I wasn't too pleased with to tell you the truth, but I am a bit mezmerized by this one or I would not have stopped by to comment.
The thumbnail looked as though they were 'portabella magical mushrooms' in an abstract format which makes it very and/or quite interesting to say the least.
That doorway light top right corner though I believe should be eliminated not exactly as a distraction but throws off the continuity of the overall bliss of such a great B&W with mystical qualities.
Thanks for sharing and Best of Regards!
P.S. Great 'title' btw ...
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Ferran Rial
{K:6670} 4/12/2006
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Good abstract MArk, very pleasant image to look at. Well done!
ferran
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