I would realyl like to see this without the twirl effect, that is a little cliche for my tastes, It would probably be a stronger image unfiltered there appears to be a lot of nice texture, and parallel lines, but they are lost with the twirly stuff.
this is ok, nice color and textures, I think it would be improved if it wasn't so centered. I think if you crop it tighter and off center that would help.