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Luigi Andena
{K:3580} 11/12/2008
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Congrat for wonderful aesthetic sense; great portfolio
Luigi
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John Charlton
{K:5595} 1/12/2003
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I would have made the same suggestion as Loyce as my inital reaction was the depth of field appears a little shallow in the foreground.
However, having seen your crop, I don't think there is a noticeable improvement or that the shallow focus is really working against you so much as it is working for you.
Think about it. If this image were tack sharp from foreground to background, would it have the same impact. For me, what works about this image is how much distance is covered and how the land and the sea are layered upon each other and are so different. Standing on the land, I am pulled toward the sea and to the shrimp boat. Yet there is a wall between us. That tension makes the picture work. The waves push me back. The focus leads me back out. There is an ebb and flow.
One small observation about the presentation which I like very much by the way. I see a white line (perhaps the edge of the image) running along the very bottom of the image just above the 3D shadow.
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michaelle .
{K:3807} 1/11/2003
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A little closer crop with some off the left frame and the bottom... does this work better?
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Alisa Mudge
{K:12511} 2/13/2004
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I don't mind the forground blurred. Mickey Mickey Mickey... shhesh woman your creativity seems to be holding strong. You have always had the eye.
Does seem heavy on the right side, but who cares.
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al shaikh
{K:15790} 1/11/2003
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Very nice framing, you are getting very good lately :)
al
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Loyce D. Hood
{K:1859} 1/11/2003
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Great tone, excellent view of the waves and the ship and birds in the background add a very nice touch. DOF a little shallow in foreground. Crop the blurred sand on the bottom and a bit on the left to even it out, and you've got it.
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