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Yahya El Hosafy
{K:8369} 12/5/2005
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very interesting potfolio u have Luis.
lovely portraits u have.
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Luis Alvarez
{K:2038} 3/10/2005
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Hi Lily,
I like your crop. Its a good idea and it focuses the image more on the portrait. Thanks for the good advice
Rgds,
Luis
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Tiger Lily
{K:10966} 3/9/2005
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congrats on the BIP, Luis.
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Tiger Lily
{K:10966} 3/9/2005
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I cloned out the right shoulder to give it some room on the bottom. Don't know if it helps.
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Mahmoud Baha Sadri
{K:19634} 3/8/2005
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the top right corner is really some thing!
well deserved!
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cerebral marv
{K:217} 2/26/2005
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lighting is great and converting it to bw is a good idea
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Judi Liosatos
{K:34047} 2/25/2005
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I look forward to seeing it.
Judi
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Geza Farkas
{K:12412} 2/25/2005
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Excellent composition and balance.
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Luis Alvarez
{K:2038} 2/24/2005
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Thanks Judi for your tips. Indeed some space under the chin would improve the image. Unfortunately I took the photo with a tripod and could not check before taking the photo. There is no more image under the chin so the only thing I can do is reduce the frame. Ill try that out. Regarding your other idea (cropping the image left of the face) I will try that out. It seems interesting.
Thanks and till your next image!
Luis
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Judi Liosatos
{K:34047} 2/23/2005
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Good self portrait. I am flattered that you feel that I give you some inspiration. With this particular image, I like the tonings and the expression. The light in the corner really gives the image some oomph!! There is a couple of things that could be done to really make it jump though. Either crop right in on part of the face or zoom it out a bit to add more space beneath the chin.
Thankyou so much for your kind words my friend.
Judi
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Rodotheos Dovilus
{K:1582} 2/22/2005
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I like the half illuminated technique
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Kosti 7even
{K:6328} 2/22/2005
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the formula is known- partially covered light source, gradation of greys on the wall, half face illuminated; well you are using it pretty well and magically you are producing a strong portrait that I like very much
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