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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
10/6/2008 12:07:09 PM
Hoi Teunis,
Great shot. I really like the colour depth with the bright green of the grass, blue in the sky and warm tints on the mill.
I don't know how much post-processing you have done on this picture but maybe you can enhance the colour depth by removing the slight red tint from the grass, that way it might pop even more? Just a thought though.
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Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
10/6/2008 1:27:49 PM
Ania,
Great shot. I really like how you darkened the edges a bit to keep the focus on the two central figures. You have used the low depth of field very well, with the high aperture value. What ISO did you shoot at?
I think you already darkened the sky a bit already, but I think it is still a bit too overpoweringly bright. Also the figure on the right draws my eye away from the main subjects.
The composition is very nice though, with the big sister being protective of her little brother. I really love how you managed to get the trust of these kids to shoot them in this way. Is this a street photography shot or are these kids you know? If the former I would love to hear how you approached the situation and got your shots. I am experimenting with street photography myself a little, and it always makes me a bit nervous to just go and take picture of people :-).
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Photo By: Ania Blazejewska
(K:23981)
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