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Critique By:
karen clarke (K:18893)
3/11/2005 4:31:59 AM
In viewing your portfolio I have realized that you have a strong point when it comes to composition. Each photograph seems to be very well balanced. Such as with this one you can see the invisible yet perfect diagonal line. Now normally for something like this, most would crop down just above or on the upper part of the head. You have left some space, but it seems to work well for you. The white sofa showing on the bottom right hand corner is rather bright(and also the skin on the breast area and lower neck), but you have pulled it off nicely because of the great amount of contrast it has against the black shirt. And of course everyone knows it's such a big "no-no" to crop out parts of arms and hands...blah blah blah...but it works for your composition. A very natural looking expression, nothing forced, so I can tell that the model has a good relationship with you. What I especially love is that the photograph is pretty much devoid of color with white sofa and black shirt-but on the lower left you get hit by a bit of blue-but its not overpowering at all. Anyhow, a really nice portrait, you have a great eye for composition and details. Keep up the great work~
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| Photo By: Luis Alvarez
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Critique By:
karen clarke (K:18893)
6/29/2004 5:02:15 PM
Spectacular the toning and mood. The tree almost seems to take on a life of its own, as if it may very well grab the bird out of the sky and entangle it with its limbs. I also like the smooth water, almost seems painted.
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| Photo By: Xunilek
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