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Critique By:
Keith Naylor (K:13064)
5/1/2004 10:22:12 PM
Hi Chris, thanks for posting the orig file, that give me a good feel for your work. I agree with all the work you have done here, it needed doing.
The main thing I get from this photo is that the grass takes on the most important element in the frame. I think this is because itscentral and the brightest. Maybe try to tone it down a little, or, and I think this might be the better option, step right a little to get the house to fill more of the frame than the 50% it does now.
Hopr that helps a little.
Cheers
Keith
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| Photo By: Chris Spracklen
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Critique By:
Keith Naylor (K:13064)
4/17/2004 12:04:19 PM
An impressive image, and as everyone has commented the double entendre work very well indeed.
The lighting is almost perfect, just a tad darker towards the top as previously noted. However its the angle at which the fruit sits that adds most to this composition, the angle is just right. I can't think of any other way to enhance the image.
Congratulations
Keith
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| Photo By: John Lamb
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