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Critique By:
Lubi Star (K:3903)
5/5/2006 10:57:29 AM
Hi Hugo…
First of all I have to congratulate you for the whole concept of depicting a journey in the wild and yet transcend at a higher level towards an inner soul searching experience… as such, the choice of long roads traveling trough empty landscapes towards an infinite end holds a strong symbolism… The use of partial blur increases the feel of “searching”… only when something isn’t clear, one tries to clarify it and put effort in it… my personal opinion is that the first and last image work better towards that direction… especially the latter due to the incorporated sign has another message… the urge to make a turn in the course of things… maybe sometimes – when everything else is unclear – a radical turn or another point of view may give the solutions needed… the car appearing in the second pic impo somehow detracts from the overall magic of the journey… too much technology? Too restricting by showing the medium of transportation? I can´t quite put my finger on it… As for the 3rd, think is too clear… too obvious despite the good framing of the landscape…
Still the overall result conveys the message and even more… Best regards…
Lubi
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