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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
3/4/2009 9:05:41 AM
Great lighting and nice use of rule of thirds. I would clone/burn the two bright spots under her lower lip. I would also liquify her right arm, since it bulged due to her pressing against her right side. Also the right shoulder between the dress strap and her neck. I would try to connect with the model. Try to put both earrings out on the open. The right right it is sort of hidden. Good exposure and nice skin stones.
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| Photo By: Arturo Salcido
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
10/4/2008 7:30:58 AM
If usefilm allowed link, maybe folks could show larger photos.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
10/4/2008 7:29:43 AM
I think re-sampled is correct. Going froma HUGE size to a tiny 750 CS3 does something to it.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
10/4/2008 1:47:07 AM
You might be correct,but very litle USM was done. I think CS3 does it whe downsizing. This is a 10M (2402x3814) jpeg down to 350K (472x750).
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
7/15/2008 6:20:15 AM
Thank you for the critique and cheers!!!
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
7/15/2008 6:19:37 AM
Merci jacques!
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
7/13/2008 5:37:31 PM
I like the color and exposure, but the road and telephone poles are too centered. It would have improved a lot if the would have beenmore to the left and not the center. THe sky it is pretty amazing.
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| Photo By: gianna piano
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/17/2008 6:08:57 PM
Thank you Hussam!
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/17/2008 6:08:31 PM
Thank you Raisa. Some folks when visiting think it is a stuffed cat until he moves...:)
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/17/2008 6:07:22 PM
Forgot this Joe. Keep in mind that when shooting at f1.4 you are after a dreammy soft look, but the areas of attention -- the DOF is about 1/8 of an inch. In this case his eyes. Thanks again for your feedback and edit.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/17/2008 6:05:27 PM
Thank you for the feed back, it does have more punch but his eyes are too saturated. This is a VERY difficult subject to expose. Besides being all white. His coat is really fine. Finer than a cotton ball. Check my other portraits of him and you will see what I mean -- the lighting is key. I learned the definiton of "how to expose" with him :) and still learning...:)
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/16/2008 7:00:02 PM
This is complete UNREAL! the composition, colors, clarity...well everything about it is just perfect! 7+
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| Photo By: John Pitman
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/13/2008 7:39:12 PM
Thank you peter!
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/13/2008 7:38:33 PM
I appreciate the feedback Ahmed!
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/13/2008 7:37:58 PM
Thank you brian.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
1/2/2008 10:49:46 PM
Gracias gustavo! Muchas gracias!
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
12/22/2007 2:29:03 AM
Momentos como estos hacen meditar a los que presencia actos de fe -- Espero que se convierta. De una u otra manera, Que Dios lo bendiaga a usted y espero que Dios le de su gracia a su amigo.
Que su alma descanse en paz.
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Photo By: Gustavo Scheverin
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
12/22/2007 12:47:05 AM
Gracias Gustavo! Estas avez son MUY MUY coloridas.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
12/22/2007 12:46:10 AM
Thanks parehan. The ef100mm it is indeed one of canon's sharpest lens. Thank you again for the critique.
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
12/22/2007 12:45:12 AM
Thanks, I might try to actually de-saturate it. I appreciate the critique.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/27/2007 6:22:08 PM
Me parece muy buena tu sugerencia. Desafortunadamente el gata montes se me aparecio de pronto con sus dos gatitos. Estaba tan nervioso que no enfoque muy bien ni puso el lente a como deberia ser. El encuadre ya lo recote. Este no es el tamano completo de la foto. Si tienes razon, pero esto fue tomado en una reserva.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/26/2007 9:42:35 PM
Very great creativity, with perfect color matching and spot on composition! 7+
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/18/2007 9:53:04 PM
Thank yu very much Abdallah! it just takes a breath to miss a moment like this.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/18/2007 9:51:52 PM
Thanks humberto. This was taken at the San Diego Wild Animal Park in Escondido, ca It was taken 6-23-2006 at about 6:08 PM in California the sun sets about 8PM in that month.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/18/2007 9:49:22 PM
Thanks for the critique.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/17/2007 7:59:54 PM
An excellent use of space and simplicity! Amazing how you were able to turn dead space into details.
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| Photo By: Gabriella Carta
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/17/2007 7:57:46 PM
What a beautiful model and portrait! The eyes are amazing!
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| Photo By: Gabriella Carta
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/17/2007 7:56:25 PM
thanks hussam! Your dabb lizard and hard worker shots are very inspiring! I can't seem to get an ant at all. Thank you much for the critique.
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/17/2007 7:42:41 PM
Thank you Jan this was a by accident shot, since I overexpose the background. Instead of trying to get what I was after. I overexposed it even more with CS# EC +1.5 and then did some work with color and shadows/higlighs. So a "bad" shot might be a blessing in disguise...;)
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| Photo By: ed silva
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Critique By:
ed silva (K:651)
11/14/2007 8:39:12 AM
Amazing colorful sensuality! The man in black adds a twist of mistery! excellent! 7+
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